I hope you like them all. Please tell me which you prefer and so and so... "Heartbreak In C#" I should really act my age but I grew up too fast, The glare from the TV is all that lights up my house, And you know that you loved my smile when I used it, But I took it away because my family abused it. I used to, smile, all the time, Now I, sit at home and I cry, About the girl, that left me, she couldn't see, The loving heart she was tearing apart. Will anyone ever remember the loving heart she was? Before she ripped mine out because "it wasn't true love," And you know she loved my smile when I used it, But I took it away because she abused it. I used to, smile, all the time, Now I, sit at home and I cry, About the girl, that left me, she couldn't see, The loving heart she was tearing apart. I should really act my age but I grew up too fast, The glare from the TV is all that lights up my house, And you know that you loved my smile when I used it, But I took it away because my family abused it, And now I'm sick, of all this shit, you're throwing to me, And now I'm tired, so damn tired, of all this... I used to, smile, all the time, Now I, sit at home and I cry, About the girl, that left me, she couldn't see, The loving heart she was tearing apart. "We're Being Taught By Losers" We're being taught by losers and they say we're all the same, We're being taught by losers, we'll never learn a thing, You say it's all our fault, But we all know it's not. We're being taught by losers, it's all the same to you and me, We're being taught by losers, we'll never learn a thing, It's all the same to us, Never cause a fuss, It's down to us. "Fall In Love" What's a girl like you doing around here? Why's a girl like you reducing us to tears? How's a girl like you gonna prove it to us? How's a girl like you gonna fall in love? You said you'd call me back, (After you had a shower) But you never did, (It shouldn't take you an hour) But you never did, (Care enough about me) To ask me why, (We spent hours fighting) What's a girl like you doing around here? I thought that we'd lost touch at the end of last year, And apologies come easily every so often, But then they're gone as quickly as they've come. You said you'd call me back, (After you had a shower) But you never did, (It shouldn't take you an hour) But you never did, (Care enough about me) To ask me why, (We spent hours fighting) And although we tried, (It never did really work) It all backfired, (And I feel such a jerk) What's a girl like you doing around here? Why's a girl like you reducing us to tears? How's a guy like me so emotionally touched? Never again will I ever fall in love. You said you'd call me back, (After you had a shower) But you never did, (It shouldn't take you an hour) But you never did, (Care enough about me) To ask me why, (We spent hours fighting) And although we tried, (It never did really work) It all backfired, (And I feel such a jerk) But there's nothing I can do, short of slaughtering you, How's the two of us gonna fall in love? "(I Know) We Could Never Work This Out" I didn't see you today because you went to his house, And you'll never tell me what you talked about, I just hope you were just talking, Not doing any of the little things. Doesn't it suck, When you're found out, I said I loved you, And you didn't need to shout, But you're angry, And this is messed up, I still love you, And I wish that we could work this out. You said that we were over and you walked right out, You wouldn't tell me what it was all about, I think that you're in love with him, This is where regrets come in. Doesn't it suck, When you're found out, I said I loved you, And you didn't need to shout, But you're angry, And this is messed up, I still love you, And I wish that we could work this out. We've got one more chance before the ties are severed, And this is empty hope; that we can keep it together, I think I'm in love with your best friend, yeah yeah, And I know that you're in love with him... Doesn't it suck, When you're found out, I said I loved you, And you didn't need to shout, But you're angry, And this is messed up, I still love you, I know we could never work this out.
Fucking hell........................Dave this is some of your best work yet! 20/10 Awesome stuff man, you've found your way out of the forest
Oh hell, these are all amazing. Heartbreak in C (can't find the stupid sharp, cause my laptop's screwed up), and Fall In Love were my favourites.
You never comment on my work <_< Just kidding Or was I.... :chemist: :chemist: I'll stop using smileys now ...oh shit
You never comment on my work <_< Just kidding Or was I.... :chemist: :chemist: I'll stop using smileys now ...oh shit [/b][/quote] I also don't view this forum that much....so hush.
That or whenever I go apeshit on myself [/b][/quote] Smiley count: 9 And Dedicated, I love your work. These were all great. Heartbreak In C# was my favorite.