2 New Ones: myHate and Flatline

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    Dedicated

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    Here's 2 new sets of lyrics that I've been working on. They're gonna be used for two of Vacancy's new songs and may have slight changes made before I'm completely happy with them however I haven't posted in here for ages and I felt like it.

    myHate is for those of you on mySpace who have a stupidly large amount of friends and who constantly bug people to post comments on your pictures, etc.

    Flatline first started being written the other night while I was watching a film called Flatliners from the 80's (it's ace, watch it). Basically, they want to experience death so they kill each other and the bring them back to life shortly afterwards... WITH HILARIOUS CONSEQUENCES!!! Not really like but it's an awesomely freaky film.

    Anyway, hope you enjoy these pieces. If you do, please comment with praise and if you don't, comment to tell me how much of a prick I am for insulting you for having 234,515 friends on mySpace. <3

    italics are screamed
    (brackets are backing vocals as it were)

    "myHate"

    So people think that you're so cute?
    If you drop the 'e' and put an 'n' before the 't'
    Then you will see what they mean,
    Like dropping the 't' from meant,
    One day you'll realise,
    Your stupid Photoshop disguise,
    Can't hide the truth from eyes,
    That shoot you such despise,
    One day you're gonna grow up,
    And look back at all of this stuff,
    And understand why people talk of you,
    Like this behind your back,
    You are the sick on the floor,
    The bloodstains on the ceiling,
    So take your "Add To Friends"
    And take it for it's meaning.

    Support your local scene,
    And by that I do not mean,
    Your 20,000 friend request queen,
    Your social fucking tool,
    Support your local scene,
    And by that I do not mean,
    Your 20,000 friend request queen,
    Your living in a dream.

    What the fuck does PC4PC actually mean?
    It's pretty fucking clear it doesn't mean a fucking thing,
    New picture that depicts you,
    Screaming for some exposure,
    Standing there with your crooked feet,
    Like crooked's fucking cute now,
    Tell me what happened to the days I used to know,
    When people used to be so real,
    Now they are screaming for comments,
    Like one without an 'm' and 'n' was coming,
    No, I don't wanna be your friend,
    So I decline knowing that you'll add me again.

    Support your local scene,
    And by that I do not mean,
    Your 20,000 friend request queen,
    Your social fucking tool,
    Support your local scene,
    And by that I do not mean,
    Your 20,000 friend request queen,
    Your living in a dream.

    I hate to be the one to tell you,
    You're not as fucking cool,
    As you thought you were in high school,
    I'd like to be the one to tell you,
    You're not as fucking cool,
    As you thought you were in high school.

    "Flatline"

    I've been dead for so long,
    I mean properly out of my body,
    Life flashing before my eyes,
    Soul moving right outside,
    My body was so limp,
    More out of sync than breathing,
    One day I'll get a wisp,
    Of coming back to this.

    I never wanted to be next, but it happened,
    And now I'm so glad that it did,
    The white light gleaming so beautifully,
    As I fell right into my death,
    I never wanted to be next, but it happened,
    And now I'm so glad that it did,
    Yeah I'm so glad that it did.

    I am the life,
    I am the one,
    I am the son sent from God,
    I am the life,
    I am the way,
    Please listen to what I have to say.

    Watch me flatline,
    Holding your breathe from time to time,
    What a landslide,
    Although I don't know why,
    I'm not breathing,
    Not moving a fucking inch,
    I can see my future,
    And I'm losing my innocence.
    (And I don't like it)

    I really wanted to be next, it never happened,
    And now I'm so glad that it didn't,
    The white light fucked around my friends,
    As they were taken away from death,
    Yeah they were taken away from death by you.

    I am the life,
    I am the one,
    I am the son sent from God,
    I am the life,
    I am the way,
    Please listen to what I have to say.

    Gotta find a way to get away from these sins,
    Gotta find a way to get away from everything,
    Gotta find a way to get away from these sins,
    Gotta find a way to get away from everything,
    Gotta find a way to get away from these sins,
    Gotta find a way to get away from everything,
    Gotta find a way to get away from these sins,
    Gotta find a way to get away from everything,
    Gotta find a way to get away from these sins,
    Gotta find a way to get away from everything,
    Gotta find a way to get away from these sins,
    Gotta find a way to get away from...

    ...the lies you told me,
    About the end,
    The lies you told me,
    About the end,
    The lies you told me, (Don't mean anything)
    About the end,
    The lies you told me, (Don't tell anyone)
    About the end,
    The lies you told me, (Don't mean anything)
    About the end, (And I loved it)
    The lies you told me, (Don't tell anyone)
    About the end. (I'll see you soon)
     
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    Jesse

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    Great songs, the first one was better in my opinion.

    Btw can I request you on myspace!? >.< Dude I'm kidding, 20,000 fucking friends is fucking rediculious.
     
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    :lol:!!

    Cheers for the comment :)
     
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    I love both of them man but Flatline is my favorite by far. I reckon it's one of your best to be honest.

    I think this line could be revised though:
    Other than that it's awesome. Both of them are excellent. Well done mate. :)
     
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    Cheers Luke, I wasn't sure on that line either but I wasn't sure what else to put for it >_<


    I'mma keep looking for that line :lol:
     

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