“The Oceans Song”

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    sickcycle

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    “The Oceans Song”


    Can you sense the oceans victory?

    The waves crash upon rocks as she sings in tune
    With rhythm and rhyme resounding, after the unyielding rain
    While the rolling black clouds above flee back to June

    Can you hear the seagulls singing?

    With a euphoric tone in their voice and confidence under wing
    She dances along with hope in her eyes and a dream in her heart
    As the sun peeks over the horizon; and with it a smile it gladly brings

    Can you see her footprints on the shore?

    After the storm has come to rest its weary wrath
    Amity lays her blanket of tranquility over the coast
    And all is in array once more, with just a little bit of faith

    Let your eyes be still

    Such a sight there is to be seen, but not with open eyes
    Only is it ever so delightful, ever so apparent after hardship
    Only is it ever so beautiful, when a pure heart beats inside
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    :eek: That is just..beautiful. The imagery! Wow...
     
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    Such poems bring me delight. This poem is marvelous
     
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    It's very nice.
     
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    sickcycle

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    thank you, I am flattered!
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    first a vision of the Tsunami....but then i can calm down after i read more...awesome! you rose a Tsunami in my mind...nobody has done that till now except for myself...you should be proud! ^_^
     
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    sickcycle

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    thank you all
     

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