“Breathing Fire”

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    sickcycle

    sickcycle Well-Known Member

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    “Breathing Fire”

    [V1]This hell-like place you keep calling home
    Why do you insist on fighting these endless battles?
    This world has trapped you, who do you have to run too?
    Your bloodshot eyes crying as your mind accepts its tomb
    You say there is no way out, why don’t you break through?

    [Pre-chorus 1]
    Find your strength/ and let it go
    Destroy your doubt/ let them know
    Find your strength/ and make a your sound
    Destroy your doubt/ and burn them down!

    [V2] Crimson drops drip to the streets steps
    Thoughts bounce back and forth with ill concepts
    Vital discussions break silence, violence takes your mindset
    Oppressed and beaten, over-stressed and weakened
    Confused, fueled with hatred, bursting from inside the skin
    Lights dim, from the demeanor, you know it’s either her or him
    Decisions spark anger, a mission to take down the oppressor
    Let it go, release your flow, let nothing smother your desire
    Don’t take it, open up your mouth, and breathe fire


    [C1] This is your life/ you’re not a puppet/ you took it/ now burn it/ release hate and/ breathe fire/ breathe fire



    [PC2] Find your strength/ and let it go
    Destroy your doubt/ let them know
    Find your strength/ and make a your sound
    Destroy your doubt/ and burn them down!


    [C2 2X] This is your life/ you’re not a puppet/ you took it/ now burn it/ release hate and/ breathe fire/ breathe fire
     
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    LP_Freak_2735

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    Thats pretty good! I couldn't get a rhythm too it though. Very nice. ^_^
     
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    ChooseYourPoison

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    You never fail to amaze me with your poetry. Great job man, I'd love to hear that as a song.
     
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    sickcycle

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    thanks for the comments, by the way hybridminoda, love the sig! Any way the rhythem is in the comma ussage, whever you see one, stop, then begin again, thats how this rap goes
     
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    Atsuzen

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    The second verse is so creative, well written and expressed! Yo how d'yall write stuff like that?!


    BTW I love the title too :lol: .
     
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    sickcycle

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    thanks again you guys
     
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    nintendo_chica

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    completely awesome.

    reminds me of a song i've written. the whole fire and burning concept is always good to branch off of.

    i love it!
     

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