I like the lyrics. :D
Thanks Guys. I'll take the advice too.
Rest in peace It wont work no more [ I never thought it did ] I pound on the floor [ not giving in ] I took the sheets of life and laid down on...
Go away License kids eternally for a full-time pedigree. Slam this kind of music on your brains trying to watch you flee. So why would you prove...
Has some sort of beat to it. I can't wait 'til the next Verse. :lol:
Hey I like this One! I can actually create a rhythm. :D
It's Good. You would want to try to make it longer, but it's good.
This is my first song. Please post any suggestions, comments, or questions. ------------------ Lost. .Chorus. Wherever I find myself, I'm all...
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