This is an updated version of one of my old poems. Atrophy At first we could barely keep our hands off each other But time is a powerful venom...
Denial I feel the cat’s claws, digging into my tongue When my reflection, asks who I am I never mourned you Just fed you to my shadow...
I enjoyed this. Very passionate and emotional. Really an excellent piece of writing.
I enjoyed this. I think everyone can relate to the confusion described in this poem- from on time or another in their lives. Good job.
Three verses was all I could think of using alliteration for the letter S. Also, I thought more then three verses of alliteration might get...
Shedding Schisms Shedding skin at sunset I succumb to my subconscious And sell my soul to stimulate Sullen and subdued senses Savoring...
Phantoms Saw myself reflected in you Thought I could stop my pain By being your tourniquet Tried so hard, to keep our cravings From...
Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer kind feedback.
Thanks so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to read them.
Nine Lives Sullen eyes, stung by the sunrise Crestfallen lovers, under ominous skies We lost our immortality today Nine lives withered, and...
Awake As I approach the portal, between consciousness and sleep I smell the romantic aroma of peach mango scented candles The sweet fragrance...
Faithful Faithful Honesty is a disgusting creature, that we decorate with lies Desires become more destructive, when they’re locked up inside...
Thanks Dusan.
Insomnia Romance awakens the unconscious And in heartbreak it never sleeps An insomnia of revelations Shattered promises, we swore to keep...
Thanks for taking the time to read my poetry. I appreciate it.
The Poisonous Tree The reaper leaves us A trail of common sense That leads to the grave Divorced from reason I nail my soul, to the...
Occult of Personality I take the path of excess To the palace of wisdom Redemption is worthless Beauty and fulfillment of the senses are...
I like it.
I really liked the lines Words like shotgun shells Blasted from both barrels If this is how you love Then I think I've had enough Truly...
I liked the bitterness of this piece, very morbid. I thought that "The blood on your lips may not be yours" was a great line.
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