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    LornVourkolakas

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    I'm sorry for never saying I love you
    For never having the courage to go to you
    And never saying whats on my mind
    I'm sorry for letting you go

    Remembering the past, it hurts me so
    I don't know what to do anymore
    All I wanted was you by my side
    Theres no way of getting you off my mind

    Oh, baby I'm in love with you
    I'm sorry for never telling you
    I want you here with me
    Oh, please don't you flee

    I'm sorry for never saying I love you
    For never having the courage to go to you
    And never saying whats on my mind
    I'm sorry for letting you go

    I sit in my bed thinking about you
    It brings a smile to my face
    I miss the talks we used to have
    You'd always have a lot to say

    I want to talk to you again
    And listen to what you have to say
    I remember reading your poetry
    How I always related to them

    I'm sorry for never saying I love you
    For never having the courage to go to you
    And never saying whats on my mind
    I'm sorry for letting you go

    Its about a girl I love. She moved and we don't talk anymore. I never had the chance to tell her how I felt about her. So I've been writing a lot of songs/poems about her. This is one of them. Tell me what you think.
     
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    Steph

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    I like this, Lorn. I felt like this before....I just never wrote then...
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    I'm glad you liked it. I'm not much of a writer since I have a problem with words. But I try.

    A lot of people have probably felt this way. I guess its just a part of life. Doesn't change the fact that it sucks.
     
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    Steph

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    Your a great write though!
    Yes it does suck....
     
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    Omar A

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    All this time I thought you were a girl :p But I guess not, since you wrote this about a girl

    BTW, good work
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    Omar.. I am a girl.. :p

    Thank you.
     
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    Omar A

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    oh sorry :blush:

    now I like your song more than I did before because it shows that everyone loves whether straight or homosexual.
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    Its okay. Almost everyone thought I was a dude to begin with. :teehee:

    Of course homosexuals can love too. Theres no question to that. I don't know how someone could think a homosexual can't love.
     
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    Omar A

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    I was just giving a point that every human being is the same and shouldn't be treated differently :)
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    I know. I was just agreeing. :p
     
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    Andrea

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    Excellent work. I can relate to that poem. I had a friend who moved away and I had feelings for him but I never told him. I wish I did though.
     
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    LornVourkolakas

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    I figured a lot of people could relate to this one, since this is the kind of thing that happens everyday. I'm glad you like it.
     

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