Fading Away

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    Omar A

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    Fading Away

    Verse 1:
    I keep on running
    Running from my own soul
    Cause I can’t keep on fighting
    I need to escape from this world
    But I’m stuck to the ground
    This gravity’s holding me back
    But I won’t fall down
    I won’t wave a white flag

    Chorus:
    I feel like I’m dead
    Cause my mind’s not letting me be
    And I’m fading away again
    As pain is taking over me

    I feel all of the hate
    Cause my heart’s not letting me see
    And I’m fading away again
    As I’m beginning to disappear

    Verse 2:
    I keep on crying
    Crying over losing myself
    Cause this pain took over me
    And I can’t seem to find any help
    But I’ll keep on shooting bullets
    Even if it means losing my life
    Till I stop all of this
    Till I finally feel alive

    Chorus:
    I feel like I’m dead
    Cause my mind’s not letting me be
    And I’m fading away again
    As pain is taking over me

    I feel all of the hate
    Cause my heart’s not letting me see
    And I’m fading away again
    As I’m beginning to disappear

    Bridge:
    I’m looking at myself in the mirror
    Watching myself as I fade away
    And I’m trying to hold myself together
    Trying to breath again

    Chorus:
    I feel like I’m dead
    Cause my mind’s not letting me be
    And I’m fading away again
    As pain is taking over me

    I feel all of the hate
    Cause my heart’s not letting me see
    And I’m fading away again
    As I’m beginning to disappear
     
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    fantasyshorti4u

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    :mellow: im not exactly sure how i feel about this... its a poem about death so... what is the hate? i mean, who is hating what or whom??

    i think it's good, though, and if it's about how you're feeling or have felt then i applaud you to be so brave as to share it. .:thumbs up:.
     
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    RiverJudeAlexander

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    i like it.
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks for the comments

    fantasyshorti4u, I feel the hate cause I'm dying. I can't be happy when I'm dead right? :lol: . In the song I'm not saying that I hate someone or something. I'm just hating the fact that I'm dying.

    Anymore comments?
     
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    Anthony.

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    Good song :D ! Keep on writing :D !
     
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    Omar A

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    thanks :)
     
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    Andrea

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    Excellent work. Keep on writing.
     
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    Omar A

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    Thanks
     

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