Another poem/song from me..hope its not too bad My Place (Somewhere Wrong) I’m sitting here thinking And I cut just to start something new Hoping ill never have to look back at the past I’m striving to be something like you It in my body that I forget who I am Tears are all that’s left to me I’m taking on everything just to belong I’m losing and I know its wrong You managed to break me down You managed to let me down I can build up my past Placed my accomplishments inside They’re on this horse up so damn high Well deserved but they will never last I had to give up everything I have ever known Everything familiar is gone Left it all burning just to find something I knew that I wouldn’t have Time is forgetting The thoughts that we had spent Everything we had hoped to become in the beginning Was something I knew was wrong Gutting my soul I like the way that this pain feels I have a friend now in you, just to hide it from My deceit gives me a feeling that I’m not alone Your hand is so cold So callous and its unforgiving I forgot that everything you have that makes you better Symbolizes absolutely nothing once its over A lapse in my confidence The understatement of my century To think I wanted to be like you Is something that will forever haunt me You managed to break me down You managed to let me down I can build up my past Placed my accomplishments Its on this horse up high Well deserved but they will never last I had to give up everything I have ever known Everything is gone Just to find something I knew that I wouldn’t have Time is forgetting The thoughts that we had spent Everything we had hoped to become Was something I knew was wrong In spite of everything in the past, this room of darkness never lasted Very last words that were ever spoken here, were nothing but a long lost whisper
Hm... I don't know what to think about this one. It's good, but I can't really relate to it. I liked your other two though.