.:Stephen:. Broken picture frames Shattered window panes Litter the narrow path up The stairs to my room Locking the door behind me Turning all the lights out Holding myself back tonight Trying to calm to strained patience She says 'I'll fix things'' But now I'm waiting What can't you see? He's pushing me too far The constant fighting Tearing us apart Isolating me out From one whole family How could you let him Within the walls of 'Us'? A family once so perfect Now cracked down the spine Questioning whether or not You'll see what it is that's happening I close my eyes Holding old memories hostage She says 'I'll fix things' But now I'm waiting What can't you see? He's pushing me too far The constant fighting Tearing us apart Isolating me out From one whole family What can't you see? He's pushing me too far The constant fighting Tearing us apart Isolating me out From one whole family Our crysanthemum dreams Are withering at the root Come on and wake up Before it's all too late Dear Mom...
'dear mom...' what a perfect touch... hmm... is it true though?? or does it have nothing to do with you...?? or am i asking too much...?? i'll just shut up now... :whistle:
Thanks guys. Any other comments would be greatly appreciated. RJA, yes it does have to deal with me. I don't mind sharing at all.
Really good, I have to say there's much emotion in it!! To put emotion in a song/poem seems very easy, but it isn't!! But you did it!! I love it!!