(i wrote this one..coz i wanted to redirect my anger) In this race against time, I awake in a storm, Wind-walking in places where I don’t belong, I can see the flare, burning in your eyes, I’ll be there, be there in a disguise Theres a face inside me, asking why, Confusing me, while I look at the sky, In the end, I’m gonna break this mirror And face what lies behind, Cause, It cant be justified, In this divide, theres nothing to decide, In this void I cannot survive, I’m just so mystified, So mystified, I’m so dry, even as I struggle underwater, I see floating memories getting scattered, Still somehow they prevent the light coming through the surface, I’m not sure, if its you I’m gonna embrace, The face inside now knows why, That I no longer stare at the sky, Behind the shattered glass, I’m surprised, To see the truth fighting with lies, Cause, It cant be justified, In this divide, theres nothing to decide, In this void I cannot survive, I’m just so mystified, So mystified, just so mystified, So mystified, Just so mystified, So mystified.
I think it's really good, if I may suggest, taking the first line to the chorus "I'm so mystified" out it would transition much better I think. You say it again so it's not like it's losing the point, though it is a short chorus, just a thought, dunno. I do like it though
yeah i agree..its a short chorus...i put it there for some unknown sense of symmetry...can u suggest a better line in its place..coz i wul like to hav four lines...
yeah..in similar thots...but..well..i was like...ohk..im mystified..these are the effects..and then again stressin on that im mystified..
doesnt rhyme... well..it makes sense..i agree der.. how about..it cant be justfied....rhymes a bit more..