VERSE 1: There's nothing left in this life There's no more to pretend No defending what is right All this s*** has to end I look back on my memories I think that they are meant to be Nightmares that haunt me So I'll leave this world quietly... CHORUS If you have anything else to say As we move our separate ways I would appreciate it... If I had just one more day I might still want to stay But now I'm through... Its time to go from you.... VERSE 2: As I distance myself From everyone else I feel the confidence draining No matter what anybody's saying You say that there's sunshine And I say that its raining Agreements are a waste of time I guess I'll have to cross the line CHORUS BRIDGE: What will my last words be, This won't end conveniantly For you, thats very true Trust me, I don't want to leave so soon Looking in the face of fate Realized that its too late I've f***ed up everyone who cares I made this all unfair OUTRO So quietly, I'm leaving I'm gone today Stopped breathing (X2)
yar.. you're right there, it is depressing, but then again i think it is easier to write something negative than something postive. anywho its pretty good.. but lately i've been quite happy so reading poems/songs like this doesnt affect me that much.. but dude good work.. ^^
Ok thanks guys, my next song will hopefully feature some really wierd lyrics like At The Drive In or something, I'll see if I can piece a song like that together
odaton, you have just inspired me to write something... and it takes a lot of inspiration to make me do anything, so congratulations!! oh, and i love how you rhymed 'be' and 'conveniently'... it's like something i'd do...
@ RiverJudeAlexander - Wow, I've never inspired someone before And I'll be sure to check out your song when you write it @Katethegreat - hopefully you are crying with joy.........