Nine Lives

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    Jabble524

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    Nine Lives

    Sullen eyes, stung by the sunrise
    Crestfallen lovers, under ominous skies
    We lost our immortality today
    Nine lives withered, and faded away

    Precious memories of passion and romance
    Wrapped in beautifully decorated cocoons
    Safe from the bitterness of regret
    And from being devoured, by the cruelty of time

    Leeches lurking in sultry eyes
    They covet intensely, and rarely compromise
    I want to hear it crackle, and smell the cinders
    Incarnate illusions, behind benevolent smiles

    Exiled connoisseur, of forbidden pleasures
    Scarlet letters carved in flesh
    Exploring ancient catacombs of the unconscious
    Searching for past lives and forgotten lovers
    Scattered throughout the sands of time

    Piecing together fragmented memories
    And mysterious dreams, veiled in shadows
    Channeling abstract, and elusive sensations
    To stimulate senses, no longer aroused
    By the narrow spectrum of consciousness

    Scavenging the obscure corners
    Of the aficionado’s abandoned wasteland
    Looking for the path to serenity
    Tired legs and weary eyes wishing
    To be home in your heart
     
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    I'm a fan of your poems. :)
     
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    Jabble524

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    Thanks so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to read them.
     
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    Very nice, very nice. I wish I could write that good :( But yeah, thumbs up!
     
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    Theazninvasion68

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    Wow. Super vivid ^^. Great poem.
     
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    Jabble524

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    Thanks so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer kind feedback.
     

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