What's the Point?

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    Shade

    Shade Well-Known Member

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    What's the Point?

    I was always told to never give up,
    And never leave things to chance or luck.
    Guess I lied to myself this time.
    This won't ever work out fine.

    So what's the point of going on?
    What's the point of writing this song?
    Everything I built was based on a lie.
    My life was a dream, and now it has died.

    I always believed that this could change,
    But now I see I'm alone on the stage.
    Forget it, I'm crawling out of this muck.
    Do what you want to do.
    I don't give a ####.

    So what's the point of going on?
    What's the point of writing this song?
    Everything I believed was never real.
    The truth was the one thing I wouldn't hear.

    I was a fool to believe this would change,
    But now you see I'm walking off the stage.
    Forget it, I'm starting with a clean slate.
    Say what you want to say.
    Your words come to late.

    So this is the point of going on.
    This is the point of writing this song.
    All I needed was to speak my mind.
    Maybe next time, it will work out fine.


    Please tell me what you think, fourth poem so far and would appreciate feedback.
     
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    Mrs.Shinoda

    Mrs.Shinoda Active Member

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    that's awesome!!!! i love it!!! good job and keep writing :)
     

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