Really I Hate You

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    The Emptiness Machine

    The Emptiness Machine Out of the abyss. LPA Über VIP

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    Really I Hate You


    I hate that you don't care
    I hate that I care
    I hate that I love your brown eyes
    I hate all starlit skies
    I hate the glowing moon
    and I hate flowers in full bloom
    how they remind me of you
    I hate the way that the wind blows
    and how my heart is a window

    I hate your perfect name
    I loathe that soon it'll change
    I hate that you had said "Yes"
    I hate this heat burning within my chest
    I hate these tears that I have cried
    and I abhor all the times you've lied
    All the times that I've felt so blue
    I hate the smile that I see
    On your face, it makes me fall to me knee

    I hate every time that it rains
    I hate how each drop whispers your name
    I despise this growing ache
    How I never sleep and always stay awake
    I hate growing apart
    and I hate this broken heart
    the way the world can be so cruel
    I hate that you're not the one
    I hate to watch a setting sun

    I hate the way that he makes you feel
    I hate that this nightmare is real
    I hate the color green
    I hate all of your favorite things
    I hate that you have no regrets
    and how he kisses you
    I hate that you'll walk down the aisle
    how it won't be so long from now

    I hate that I wish you well
    I hate these secrets that I can't conceal
    I hate that I'm proud of you
    I hate that I'm fond of you
    I detest that I sent that star
    and years gone and feelings far
    I hate that I love you, dear
    and I hate that I'm left standing here

    I hate all of the love that I bleed
    I hate how it stretches further than infinity
    I hate to leave you alone
    I hate your voice, I'd hate to phone
    I hate this flame within my heart
    and the way that I'm being torn apart
    I hate that I love you, dear
    and I hate that if you need me, I'll be there..
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    it's really well framed. flows satin like, inspite of the repitition. not forced at all. sounds very professional, as if it's come from one who know exactly what he wants to convey and knows which direction to hit. which is true, which is you.
     

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