Untitled (can't seem to think of one)

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by crazy_dips:-), Oct 20, 2003.

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    crazy_dips:-)

    crazy_dips:-) Member

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    crazy_dips:-), Oct 20, 2003



    Tell me what you think... just something I wrote quickly one day.

    tears fall silently
    cuts bleed and won't stop
    the pain resonates within my being

    waves of despair
    wash over me
    and i drown
    in the onslaught
    of your indifference

    i wonder
    how can you not see
    what you are doing to me
     
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    arT saveS

    arT saveS Y2K

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    arT saveS, Oct 20, 2003



    It's good. A bit short though. But I definately like
    Good job! :D
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_

    _PianoPaPercut_ Ambient

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    _PianoPaPercut_, Oct 22, 2003



    it's short.. but i like it.. ^^ its quite powerful too.. ^_^.. good work..
     

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