One More Last Kiss

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    Dedicated

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    One More Last Kiss

    The memories of you fill my mind,
    Fill me with happiness, you’re one of a kind,
    The beautiful smell of your silky brown hair,
    Drags on me even when you’re not there,
    And when you cry, I hold you tight,
    And hope that the morning might,
    Stop the tears and the sadness to,
    Don’t say a word, it’s okay, I love you,
    I love you,
    I love you.

    I want to even out the score,
    You owe me one kiss; I owe you more,
    Please, wipe the tears from your eyes,
    We both know what happens when an angel cries,
    We die.

    I put my arms around you just to get you closer to me,
    You softly kiss me, the feeling’s mutual I see,
    Your beautiful face imprints on my mind,
    I don’t understand but I’m sure you’ll find,
    Your eyes penetrate the dark; they’re beautiful,
    And when those bright blue eyes go dull,
    I try to stop the tears and the sadness to,
    With three short words that are, “I love you”
    I love you,
    I love you.

    I want to even out the score,
    You owe me one kiss; I owe you more,
    Please, wipe the tears from your eyes,
    We both know what happens when an angel cries,
    We die.

    I’d do anything to find out how you feel,
    Then you kiss me; I know this is real,
    Treasure even this picture of you with my heart,
    I don’t know what I’d do if we fell apart,
    So when you smile I hold you tight,
    And know that, by tonight,
    The tears will stop and the sadness to,
    I pray to God you know I love you,
    I love you,
    I love you.

    I want to even out the score,
    You owe me one kiss; I owe you more,
    Please, wipe the tears from your eyes,
    We both know what happens when an angel cries,
    We die.

    Once again, a victim of your smile,
    And the unhealthy love that takes awhile,
    To understand, but when I do,
    I’ll wonder how I could live without you,
    But when the years fly by, and we,
    Break apart and can finally see,
    That it was not meant to be like this,
    I swear I’ll always want one more last kiss.

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    Tell me what you think of it :)
     
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    Phantom Duck

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    Great inspiration.
    But i hate romantic songs :p
     
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    Like I said before, great song!
     
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    Sooo romantic! :)
     
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    :lol:


    Thanks, everyone :)
     
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    Dude, you have NO IDEA how much I can relate to that right now. (Long story about me and my girlfriend breaking up and becoming "friends with benefits" and her going out with other guys while we still made out and ####, and me getting jealous, and her telling me she never wanted to see me again, but when her and her old boyfriend broke up she came to me...except this time she told me to #### off and shes over me...)

    And I still want one more kiss from her.

    Sorry, don't mean to bore anyone, thats a really short version of it though, so it's not as bad as it would have been.
     
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    Dedicated

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    Glad you like it, man. :)








    Hope your situation gets better aswell :)
     
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    ok, u right ur songs with wordpad, when u sent me this on msn and asked for help with a title, i opened it in notepad, and had to read it funny, and now i see it wasnt in order, and now that i look at this, the first verse is amazing, this is your best work yet, BY FAR, congratulations man, keep writing
     
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    Its soo cool :eek: :lol: :D
     
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    wow, that's pretty cool man :) ur really good.. i thought u had the IQ of a pig's *ss.. but this is great















    :lol:
     
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    Thanks. :(
     
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    Thanks for the support people ^_^




    @Fred Durst, I think this is my joint best :)









    It's a shame you opinion means nothing to me :whistle:













    J/K :lol:
     
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    Wow. That's really good. Most impressive.
     
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    Thanks alot :)
     
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    :p he does
     
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    :p he does [/b][/quote]
    Dave is a very smart kid..lol
     
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    WoW that song is awesome! I like romantic songs... :rasberry:
     
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    Thanks everyone :)
     
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    i know you recorded a song before, i really hope you make good guitar notes for this and record it, make it slow :D
     
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    Wow... Dave... that is really really good.
     

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