Minutes to Midnight

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    Gloomy Mushroom

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    The clock is ticking and she is still waiting for him to arrive
    It is now or never, it's their will to survive
    That keeps them hanging on to their love for one another
    Like a mother to her father and like a sister to her brother

    Forbidden by the vines of a family dispute that never could end
    It is a hateful example, one that's not easy to mend
    Her love for him was ever so much it was love at first sight
    In a marketplace, in the harshness of a winter night

    They met eyes for the first time at their meeting
    He kissed her hand and she bowed to give her greeting
    Her skin was as soft as a hand woven material
    She laughed as he spilt his newly bought cereal

    Ever since that time they had been torn apart by bitter hate
    Their families ate it as though it was food on a plate
    For it was to be with one another or to be dead
    To be or not to be that is the question, Shakespeare once said

    He came galloping on his black horse through the mist
    He was coming, without her, he could not exist
    The thought of not being together shattered him to death
    He could not turn out like Shakespeare's Macbeth

    She had saved him from a life that was wrong and ill
    She was the his only surviving will
    He swung off his stallion and landed on the dark ground
    Taking caution to make not a sound

    She raced over to the window didn't care to look around
    Opened the window when her father roared "To him you are not bound!"
    She turned around in shock and he grabbed her by the hair
    He yelled "You are not to leave this house, do not dare!"

    Her lover was quick to react and jumped through to the room
    Their fate together was nothing but a doom
    The father threw his daughter down to the rug
    His daughter cried "Go away you fat ugly slug!"

    "We love each other, don't you understand?"
    The father yelled "Why him? Why this treacherous man?"
    The lover took a swing at the father but he caught the fist
    Her father was fuming mad and the lover was on his death list

    The father pulled out a knife and stabbed it through the lover
    The lover stepped back, holding the wound, he had to recover
    The daughter weeped and pleaded her father to go
    But her father shook his head and spat on the lover, who was so low

    The father picked up the lover and threw him outside
    "He's going to die if we don't help him!" the daughter cried
    Any excuse to see her lover would do today
    But the father knew that his daughter was now going to pay

    With her life and her betrayal to her house
    She cried even more, her tears wetting her blouse
    Her father shut the window so no one could come through
    Not even a speck of dust, could come in too

    He dragged his daughter away and ordered her execution
    For him, as a father, that was the only solution
    She was hung in public the next coming day
    Which makes the saying true, love really does pay​
     
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    The Emptiness Machine

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    I'm pretty sure I really like this.
     
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    Gloomy Mushroom

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    Thanks :)
     
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    ^_^ Pretty interesting, i was pulled into the story quite easily.
     
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    Thanks Mavvy. I think this has got to be the best poem I've written for a while.
     
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    Chris Tucker

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    It's so much better than the other one :)
     

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