One Shot

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    Andrea

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    *This is probably the most disturbing piece of writing I have ever written. It's about suicide so if you don't like that subject, don't read this. If you do read it, comments are appreciated.*

    One Shot

    I sit in my room and write this note to you
    Expressing my actions on what I'm about to do
    Living and faking, I can not stand it
    My existance shall be gone with just one click
    (one shot, one shot)

    I'm losing my grip on reality
    Too many scars lie deep within me
    A single question still stands tall
    When I trigger it, will I feel myself fall?
    (one shot, one shot)

    I've been subjecting myself to pain for far too long
    So I put down this pen, intending to fix what is wrong
    I stare at what I wrote with tears trickling down
    Contemplating on what you will do when it finally sounds
    (one shot, one shot)

    I picked up the gun, now concealed in my hand
    Pointed it at my skull and waited for my command
    With one last breath I did the job
    Dying on the floor as I faintly hear the knob
    (one shot, one shot)

    You opened the door welcome by a sight
    that you never thought you'd see
    A bloody hand surrounded by the weapon
    that has just consumed me.
    (one shot, one shot)

    One Shot.
     
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    thats really cool dude! great job ;)
     
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    Gaabjuh

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    It's really great!! I have to say, that I really like your lyrics.. when I read it, I can really relate, it's a gift to make lyrics like that...!!
    Keep it up! :D
     
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    Andrea

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    Thanks.
     
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    Kate

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    I like it. It's got a very strong feel.
     

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