Hey guys! Tell me what you guys think of this poem Nightmare I hate you for what you’ve made me Almost like I’m not myself anymore You have poisoned my mind You’re dragging me down to the hell where you live Imprisoning me in your heart and throwing away the key You’ve made me lose my soul I cried tears of blood and as the blood went down my face My life went with it… As my tears touched my lips I remembered that you once kissed me And the blood was just washing it away… making it a part of history… When I look into your eyes all I see is something that will never be again When will I be set free again? All I want is to spread my wings and fly away from your deadly love Maybe this is all a nightmare and one day… I’ll wake from a never ending sleep
hehe thanks i'm new at the whole poetry writing thing so im glad that you like it and Kat thanks for telling me why colour wasn't showing up on my signature... i was wondering why it wasn't working. lol
wow.. thats good.. heh.. especially since you sed that your new at poetry..!! hhehehe.. keep it up!! ^^