If anyone would tell me what they think of this piece, I would be much excellated. Thank you, in advance. .:The Wright Lover's Flight:. I locate Your prescence Out in the Elated Garden The night Is still young And the sun Starting to set Matches the vibrance Within your eyes An evening with you Everything I've always wanted Butterfly magic Surrounds us Take me upon Your wings And together We'll fly Off into The distant night An elaborate system Of fountains Overflows Mimicing the pleasures Within my heart Off to in the distance Floral patterns Trace my sight As far as I can see I know that things Are looking up for us Butterfly magic Surrounds us Take me upon Your wings And together We'll fly Off into The distant night I hold your hand In the aged gazebo Her head on my shoulder And her blonde hair Blowing in the wind It's dark here now But the moon Illuminates my thoughts And every moment We're together Is more than I deserve Butterfly magic Surrounds us Take me upon Your wings And together We'll fly Yes, we'll fly Off into The distant night
I really like it a lot. I love the way it flows and the words you used. Great job and keep up the great work.