Bleeding

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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 1, 2003



    Bleeding

    Verse 1:
    Is there a way
    For me to save myself
    Is there a day
    Where I won’t have to call for help
    And is there a chance
    That I can cure my heart
    Is there a hand
    that’s willing to pull me from the dark

    Chorus:
    Why am I different
    Why won’t I feel the same
    Why am I the only person
    That bleeding over and over again

    Verse 2:
    Is there such love
    That won’t hurt inside
    Is there such luck
    That lasts a lifetime
    And is there a dream
    That can come true in a day
    And is there a believe
    That can be felt in a different way

    Chorus:
    Why am I different
    Why won’t I feel the same
    Why am I the only person
    That bleeding over and over again

    Bridge:
    As much as I’ve been loved
    I want all this to stop
    So open your hands and set me free
    Cuz I need my own space to breath

    Chorus:
    Why am I different
    Why won’t I feel the same
    Why am I the only person
    That bleeding over and over again
     
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    Andrea

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    Andrea, Oct 4, 2003



    Amazing. I love it. Great job. :)
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 4, 2003



    Thanks ^_^
     
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    Debus, Oct 4, 2003



    Very nice work :rolleyes:
     
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    Jamie

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    Jamie, Oct 4, 2003



    Thats good man
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 4, 2003



    Thanks guys
     
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    Mrs.Shinoda

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    Mrs.Shinoda, Oct 5, 2003



    That was VERY GOOD!!!! I love it!!!
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 6, 2003



    Thanks once again :)
     
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    John.

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    John., Oct 7, 2003



    Try not to use repetive rhymes alot, in your song "Lost" you have exactly the same or similar rhymes as in this song. Try to stay away from stuff like that because it can make all your songs sound the same and that's not good, lol.
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 20, 2003



    Thanks alot.

    I will try to not to use repetive rhymes in my upcoming song.
     
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    Mrs.Shinoda

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    Mrs.Shinoda, Oct 25, 2003



    that was so cool!!!! i love it!!!
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 26, 2003



    Thanks ^_^

    Any more comments?
     
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    Metamorphosiss

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    Metamorphosiss, Oct 26, 2003



    It's very good. Awesome! :)
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 27, 2003



    Thanks Metamorphosiss
     
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    Trumtram, Oct 29, 2003



    i really like the chorus! :)
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 29, 2003



    Thanks
     

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