I've felt this way for a long time, it doesn't seem to go away I can't feel you, numb is how I'll always stay I guess feeling physical pain helps the pain inside It's obvious now. Everyone can see the scars I try to hide I can't stop hurting myself,it's become a part of me Cut myself and scream the pain,cut myself just to bleed Cut myself and start to cry,cut myself to give you signs Signs to tell you I'm in need of a true friend A friend who'd help me put this to an end It hurts so bad to have open wounds inside and out It hurts so bad to know I'm always put in doubt So I cut myself again, but nobody seems to care I cut myself again, but all you do is stare I can't take this anymore, too much pain in me I'm giving up on life now, trying to be set free And then I cut myself once more, but you won't let me go And I cut myself again, but care is what you show And I try to cut myself, but you seem to stop me from feeling more pain Now I can't cut myself because you showed up before I sliced the vein And I'm still in this great depression, I'm still in pain But thanks to you, I know I've got less to lose and more to gain HOPE YOU LIKE IT!
Sounds great, you got a flow to the poem that I like, but one thing: Maybe you should replace some of the "pain"s with a synonym of the word instead of saying "pain" 6 times throughout the poem. Otherwise, I love it!