a poem

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    Kate

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    Kate, Oct 2, 2003



    I see by silver moonlight
    As I lie as in a dream
    It's three o'clock--I can't sleep
    Voices echo in my mind
    And as a cloud drifts toward the moon
    I hear your echo speak
    It says, "you are my angel"
    This I can't believe
    I am stone, untouched and cold
    I cannot reach your hand
    It's three o'clock--one tear falls
    My soul is not my own.
     
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    Omar A

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    Omar A, Oct 2, 2003



    I love it!!! I think the title should either be "Three O'clock" or "Your Echo"
     
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    [Fool], Oct 5, 2003



    my angel or one of the above
     
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    Dedicated, Oct 5, 2003



    I think...


    Moonlit


    ^_^


    Good poem by the way ^_^
     

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