The Abandoned

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    El Muerto

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    Sailing slowly to the sunset
    Our vessel takes shape of a casket
    The sky is overcast at once
    The sea is asking for a dance

    Our sight is getting blurry
    And the air, it smells of fury
    Tear the sails and raise the flag
    There's no way forth and no way back

    Oh what a day to get stranded
    The sea, the master and the slave, we yell and scream but all in vain
    There's no way to command it
    We're the innocent abandoned

    All the miles now mean nothing
    All the hours, the clocks are stopping
    To save our blood from being spilled
    We pray to God we tried to kill

    Saints and sinners all in one
    Drenched with fear, we're sinking down
    To the lowest parts of hell
    With eyes shut tight as we exhale

    Oh what a day to get stranded
    The sea, the master and the slave, we yell and scream but all in vain
    There's no way to command it
    We're the unfortunate abandoned

    On this island in confusion
    Time for divine retribution
    For atrocities we've done
    And the monsters we've become

    We won't die, we'll live in death
    Forever smell our rotting breath
    We're all children of the storm
    And this is right where we belong

    Oh what a day to get stranded
    The sea, the master and the slave, we yell and scream but all in vain
    There's no way to command it
    We're the righteously abandoned
     
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    Sønic

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    I really like this. Great writing.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Thanks :)
     
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    Dean

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    I really like it, I'd probably say it's one of my favourites of yours.
     
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    El Muerto

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    Gracias :)
    It's one of my favourites of mine as well :D
     
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    vasiab

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    ^
    Dusan that was great!!!!!!!!!My favorite so far in the LPA!
     
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    El Muerto

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    σε ευχαριστώ
     
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    vasiab

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    :eek: written in Greek! wow!
    ^_^
     
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    El Muerto

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    Google translator :p :lol:
     
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    vasiab

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    ^
    I've never tried that!! cooooool!
     
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    El Muerto

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    That's how I write my lyrics. I write them in Serbian and then GT translates it with rhyming and all. It changes the rhyming scheme from time to time though, but I'm not complaining.
     
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    vasiab

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    ^
    This is great!! I'll go and try the translator now!!!
     

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