Changing In Me

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    Steph

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    "Changing In Me"

    I look around to see what I can find
    To no amazement in my mind
    All I see is the nothingness
    As it surrounds me

    chorus
    Drowning in my own fears
    Consumed by the years
    Burning in my self hate
    I need to open the gate
    To my inner light

    For what its woth, for my own sake
    I've tried not to be a b##ch
    Too many times, have I made that mistake
    I need to set free
    The inner light inside of me

    Chorus

    Why is it everytime I try, and change
    All my surroundings seem so strange
    Maybe I'm not used to all this light
    but inside I can win this fight

    Chorus
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_

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    heya.. thats a good a poem/song! ^_^neat work.. i especially liked the chorus.. keep writing...! :joe:
     
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    Anthony.

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    Excellent poem/song :D . But you should maybe add one more verse ;) .
     
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    Jamie

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    Deffinantly add another verse then it'll be perfect
     

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