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    Will

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    Could You

    Could you give me a reason why
    you put me through all this?
    I just wish I wasn’t shy
    so I could show her, with a kiss,
    just how strong my love is...

    Could you let me know now
    what I need to do?
    I need to know how,
    so I can prove my love to you;
    that my heart is true...

    Could you show me a sign,
    something from above?
    You’re all I needed to find
    and you’re my true love;
    as beautiful as a dove...

    Could you please help me out
    so I can get through this?
    Because there is no doubt,
    we’ll be together with that kiss
    and pass this rought test...

    Could you help me to understand
    why He’s done this to me?
    I’ll take you by the hand
    and hold you close to me;
    I’ll keep you here with me...
     
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    Andrea

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    Awww Will! That was really good. A little bit sad but yet very sweet.

    Good job. ;) :)
     
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    aWWWwwwWWWwwWWwWW... its neat.. heh..
     
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    arT saveS

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    Wow, lately I've been seeing some really good songs on here..all though this one is more of a poem but...I give it a 10/10, and for some reason I really like what you did with how you set it up like..

    Rhyme 1
    Rhyme 2
    Rhymes with 1
    Rhymes With 2
    Rhymes with 2

    I like that a lot...I dunno, anyways, good job! :D
     
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    umm... really nice...really ^_^
     
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    MaDd BoKo 03

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    its called a rhyme scheme pal...it is A B A B B
     
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    Uh thanks for telling me, but I really don't care, I was just saying I liked it.
     

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