Mind Games My insecurities get the best of me I want to be free of my misery My life is staind with all this sh*t I can't think straight and I've had enough of it My suicidal thoughts break me inside It hurts so much that I just want to die I feel like I can't go on but somehow I do I just wish everyone could see what I'm going through No one understands and no one ever will About all this pain and suffering that my heart begins to fill I cry out for help but no one ever hears I'm alone in this world with all of my fears I know it's not the best and it's rather short but I just had to write something because I'm in a bad mood. Any comments?
well.. i think its a really well made poem.. short and straight to the point.. its so sad tho.. but i do tha same wen im in a bad mood, it helps to release all that supressed emotions and feelings inside.. so its all good (..?) yar.. but good job.. hope u feel fine soon..