**************************** Smoke and Mirrors People say the same thing Love isn't real, its just a game; The odds slated against you And what is the price to play? One's sleep, one's Sanity? And every move to tame one's innermost feelings, To end always in vain? Why play this then? Why waste the time? The pawns are the only ones hurt. Will it ever end up fine? Why do I still chase after you? It always ends the same. Every seeming success, Is just a step closer to pain. I'm trying to hold on. I'm trying not to lose my grip. But after so many failed attempts, I can tell I'm starting to slip. I wish there were an easy way out. I wish I could accept how things are. But I can't believe this is right And until it is, I have to fight. Forget this bullshit Just leave her with her lies. For I've come to realize That I'm the only one who tries. But then I hear your laugh, and then I see your face Perhaps another chance is all that it will take? Now you've ditched me again Can't you tell it to me straight? I only want the truth! Just say it to my face! Why do I still chase after you? It always ends the same. Every seeming success, Is just a step closer to pain. Now I'm through holding on My turns over, its your move Where we go from here I leave that up to you. So just make a decision And think before you choose After this I won't be turning back This time I'm serious; I can promise that. ********************************** Tell me what you think, still new to writing
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