I tried a little bit of rapped verses, tell me what you think. we are seven another battle in the middle of nowhere third year in here don't know the reason for warfare blindfolded just like the rest of the soldiers they put gun in my hands now i am playing their war games snowflakes in air, now the enemy's spotted gotta stay calm, and think about my daughter at the end of the winter long awaited homecoming gotta open my four eyes now, the fight is rolling the sound of hand grenades, gotta cover my friends surrounded, they're running, they're not waiting for me afraid and all alone, now i realize if i wanna save their lives i'll have to sacrifice i load my gun, a blast, and all six fall down another blast and then the familiar sound the air support has come, the choppers take me away on the way to the hospital they heard me say early in the morning we are seven and when the night descends we are seven when i close my eyes we are seven we will never die it was the morning, she opened her eyes to the sound of the waves they're coming closer and closer it's time to leave this place she saw a glimpse of the danger approaching on her mother's face honey please speed up the pace, said father carrying suitcase her brothers were down in the car trying to start the engine her sisters were helping her mother trying to pack their future in a couple of little bags that is all that they had there was nobody to warn them about the weather ahead and a split second she's swiming the waves are crashing around her for a five year old little girl the ocean's too much too struggle with the rescue team found her a day after tsunami woke up in field all alone surrounded by the drowned bodies she saw her mother, her father, brothers and sisters around her she saw a couple of others, and at that moment they spotted her no shoes on her feet, her home a pile of concrete the doctor asked for her name, the only words that she uttered early in the morning we are seven and when the night descends we are seven when i close my eyes we are seven
it's very very good attempt at rap. very meaningful lyrics. love how you've glued in two separate tragic stories in one piece. better yet how one was a tragedy of loss of life and how the other was a loss of a future. also admire how the first story talk about a more mature man and the second story is about this little girl and yet, how they think alike in these consequences. awesome.
Thanks a lot I almost forgot about this one lol Thanks to Wild Angel too btw @cale I wrote the two parts to two separate beats, and I feel they flow pretty well. But maybe I'm wrong, I'm not too good at rapping anyway..