Happiness

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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    This is a terrible poem. I probably shouldn't even post it here. But for some reason when I feel like this...I like to know someone else, even if only a stranger online, may have read and sympathized with me. Even if they just pity me. This is long, and lacks direction. It has no structure, no rhyme. It's awkward and unwieldy. It suits me.

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    Happiness

    You made me cry again today
    It was just like old times
    No I didn't see you or hear you
    Smell you or touch you
    Taste you
    But I did miss you
    If my heart is in pieces
    Then my memories are intact
    Like the necklace you'd wear
    Like the noose around my neck
    Something to hang onto
    When there is nothing left
    I'm dying to talk to you
    I want to tell you I still love you
    Or a part of me does at least
    You had made me feel terrible
    No, I'm not blaming you
    But it still happened
    So many nights
    I would lie awake in bed
    Sobbing
    Wondering again and again
    Why you weren't at my side
    When I was with you I was miserable
    Mostly
    But there were moments
    Where I honestly believed you loved me
    And I loved you
    Oh, how I loved you
    And in that moment
    That infinitesimal iota of time
    When our eyes would meet
    Or our lips would lock
    And I was happy
    Happy
    And I feel better now
    Maybe not today
    But usually
    I have new friends
    Even if I lost my old ones
    People care about me
    One girl even asked me out
    (And she was pretty cute!)
    I'm okay now
    I'm decent
    Fine
    But I'm not happy
    Just stagnant
    Occasionally dancing with depression
    But I'm alright
    Just sick of every song reminding me of you
    Of thinking about you ever day
    I remember once when we were together
    You told me about your ex boyfriend
    How he sometimes still writes about you
    You laughed a little
    Laughed that he still missed you
    Are you laughing now?
    What have you said about me
    Whatever it was, it can't be worse than my words
    Than what I have said about you
    But I take it back
    Too little too late I'm sure
    But I'm doing it anyway
    And I feel different today
    Because while I still know we're incompatible
    That if you were mine I'd be sobbing right now
    That things are better off this way
    I don't care.
    I miss you
    I want you back
    And I'd sob alone every night
    Feel like a waking corpse each day
    And think to myself “You can always die”
    Every time you hurt me
    Which would be often
    And I would know this wasn't your fault
    That it was my own insecurities
    My own vulnerabilities leaving me like this
    I would whine to my friends
    Until they didn't want to talk to me anymore
    (Or betrayed me)
    And I'd cry on your shoulder
    Until you called me a burden
    Fucking pathetic
    Immature
    If I could once again share with you
    That moment of happiness
    And for an instant have a reason to believe I am alive
    Other than the fact that I wish I wasn't
    And no I'm not suicidal
    (Again)
    And I don't feel like this all the time
    I'm usually okay
    Decent
    Fine
    But I love you
    And you
    Only you
    Made me happy.
     
    Last edited: Jan 6, 2008
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i think i have read this on your blog. but i'd like to add one last comment on how i love the fact that you've named such a broken emotionally confused poem with something so confidently reassuring like "Happiness".
     

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