I've been working on this song for abuot a week and I've just finished it. I may do some little corrections on it etc to make it better. This is a song I wrote for my band --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Unjustified War This country; lost in the wars, This life; full of chores, World leaders; following like sheep, ‘Friendly fire’ accidents; the family’s weep, We can’t keep pretending that it’s right, When people die in a war we don’t have to fight, We all know that you’re wrong, You don’t have to fight just to be strong… Gotta shoot; can’t bring yourself to do it, Got a gun, you’ve gotta use it, Kill or be killed; that’s the way it is, Why the hell is the world like this? This time, we’ve lost again, This year, not like back then, It’s gone to hell, with plans for peace, Can’t you figure it out so these wars can seace? The blasts from the bombs are devastating, While no good attempts have been infiltrating, Hearts broken by the devastation, He made the wrong decision by imitation. Gotta shoot; can’t bring yourself to do it, Got a gun, you’ve gotta use it, Kill or be killed; that’s the way it is, Why the hell is the world like this? The deaths; of the innocent, The bombs; we know they were meant, Lives at risk just to keep a reputation, Why are kids needing resuscitation? There’s no need to be doing all this, Why are you taking all these risks? If you keep it up, it won’t be alright, People cry as the bombs are in flight. Gotta shoot; can’t bring yourself to do it, Got a gun, you’ve gotta use it, Kill or be killed; that’s the way it is, Why the hell is the world like this? You notice it’s not okay, You’ll understand someday, Just stop it as soon as you can, Don’t have to fight to be a man. You notice it’s not okay, You’ll understand someday, Just stop it as soon as you can, Don’t have to fight to be a man. Gotta shoot; can’t bring yourself to do it, Got a gun, you’ve gotta use it, Kill or be killed; that’s the way it is, Why the hell is the world like this? Gotta shoot; can’t bring yourself to do it, Got a gun, you’ve gotta use it, Kill or be killed; that’s the way it is, Why the hell is the world like this? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Tell me what you think
Lyrics are full of sense, rhymes are excellent, I want to hear this song . A mix between heavy and light riffs would be really cool but I guess you already have an idea about what you're gonna do. Keep on the good work . And yes it reminds me Boom! too.
Did I? [/b][/quote] That was actually me that told Fred Durst that I'm gonna write an anti war song. I'm almost finished the song, I'll probably have it posted tonight. BTW, I really like your work Dedicated, keep on writing.
Whoa...ok, I don't really know what to say..except thats superior. That was probably..no that was the best set of lyrics I have ever seen, wow, I'm sorry I don't know what to say..I never do when I see good lyrics, but trust me I'm not just saying this like everybody else does.."oh cool, keep writing" I'm saying if you do keep writing stuff like that, I know you could be wrote down as the best lyricist in the world. Wow....