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    Steph

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    Steph, Aug 29, 2003



    I don't know why I do the things I do
    I hate when I insult you
    I don't know why I say the things I say
    I cry when I make you feel that way
    I try to tell you how I feel
    But I just don't know if what we have is real
    You're the best thing thats ever happened to me
    In writing this I am hoping you will see
    Just how much you mean to me.
     
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    Andrea

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    Andrea, Aug 30, 2003



    Wow. Short and to the point. :lol:

    Very good! :)
     
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    LPstreetsoldier

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    LPstreetsoldier, Aug 30, 2003



    yea its very short but it has strong feeling to it, good job!
     
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    Steph

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    Steph, Aug 30, 2003



    Thank you both :)
     
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    _PianoPaPercut_, Sep 5, 2003



    aww.. thats such a cute poem.. heh.. its short and sweet! neat work!! peace and dust...^_^..
     
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    Ppr:Kut, Sep 11, 2003



    WOW ^_^ Short and awesome!!
     
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    Mrs.Shinoda

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    Mrs.Shinoda, Oct 5, 2003



    yeah, very cool!!!! good job!!!
     
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    Methybrea

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    Methybrea, Oct 5, 2003



    Good stuff :teehee:

    I like your decision for keeping it short. Its like one of those little notes, where you don't want to write an essay or anything, just a small but powerful poem thats to the point. Keep it up.
     
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    Debus, Oct 6, 2003



    Exceleent! I can relate to that one :'( :'( :'(
     
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    [Fool], Oct 6, 2003



    i agree with ginjarulez

    i can definatly relate 2 that :'( :'( :'(
     
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    Jamie, Oct 7, 2003



    one word..strong
     

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