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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    I look out the window
    Into the blinking stars staring back at me
    And I wonder
    Why people say there is a God
    A God that would bring me so much misery
    So much torture and pain
    Always consuming me
    So much that I fall into this pit of darkness
    And become numb with cold
    And I wonder
    Why there is no one to rush to my side
    To help me
    To calm my bubbling emotions
    Constantly rising to the surface and exploding everywhere
    If there was a God
    He would take away my pain
    And let me feel happiness again.


    Bit short. Just something that I wrote last night. Post thoughts, please.
     
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    LinkinTheory

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    Ya know, I'm gonna rant. I hate it when people whine about how God ain't doing ####. That's bullshit. You're alive aren't ya? You're getting a meal every day. You've got a roof over your head don't ya? If God granted everyone's wish, then the economy would crash cause everybody would pray for what they wanted instead of pay for what they wanted. Chaos would reign. Now you're alive, you have food, and you have a roof, what the hell else do you NEED?
     
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    Will

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    I found that very rude and disrespectful, and because of that, you are going to be receiving a warning. Have a nice day.
     
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    Jawknee

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    I really liked that Terry. Really good job.
     
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    Andrea

    Andrea best friends. LPA Addicted VIP

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    Great job, Terry! I really liked it. :)
     
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    Cal

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    its really good, it has a good flow
     
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    Gaabjuh

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    F*ck what LinkinTheory said.. Its really awesome!! Very good job!! :D
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    Thanks for the feedback! :)
     
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    Omar A

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    Very well done
     

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