(Please take the time to download and listen.) I was experimenting one night and came up with this. Just basically while trying to record vocals for a song and this happened to pop out during my warm-up. It reminds me of Yellow Card's 'Holly Wood Died' Anyway, please tell me what you think. May even write something based on it and record full vocals and work on instrumentals afterwards. The first rough draft Showing interest in what I came up with.
I listened to it. I thought it was pretty good, I haven't heard that Yellow Card song though. EDIT: I only listened to the second one btw
That's okay. The first one was basically just the first part of the second one and a little more agressive. I apreciate your feedback