"Red Sky" There are times when I'm just awestruck Over the things you put me through Everything seemed great at the time Then I began to see "true" you I imagine what might have been Then I imagine myself bruised Torn apart and broken again By all the things you put me through Your eyes, they fall From this red sky Crash to the ground Now you watch in Disbelief that I am gone All this time You left me bleeding Face-down on your floor Tears pierce the skin Broken promises Feel like salting Open wounds
I like it...I have to admit I thought of the Thrice song when I saw the title though . Either way, it was a good piece.
Yeah. I've actually got no idea why I posted it. It's not anywhere near done. Plus the second and third stanzas were taken from some lyrics from a band of a friend of mine, so they're not even mine. Whenever I get around to it, I guess I'll post the real thing.
It's pretty good so far, it reminds me of some past relationships. I would have named it Scarlet sky though for more spazaz and what not.
The actual title (once I get the lyrics finalized) is probably going to be "Enough Talking, Let's Get Down to Business (Shut Your Mouth, It's Time to Dance)."
sounds like someone's been listening to a little too much Cobra Starship to me. Unfinished or not, I still really like it. Can't wait to see the final version.