.:Idealistic Dreamings:.

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    Tim2

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    If you could tell me what you think of this I'd mean alot to me. Thanks.


    .:Idealistic Dreamings:.

    Looking up into
    The August sky tonight
    The clouds passing
    Overhead of all my thoughts
    The stars positioned
    So perfectly
    The moon looks down on me
    He gives me the light
    But I can't concentrate
    I see you in my mind
    And lose track
    Of everything I feel

    So confused without you here
    I need your touch
    To make me feel real again
    I want to be in your arms
    It's where I feel safe
    I want your hand in mine
    It's where I feel serene
    I want you here
    I want you here with me

    The sun hits its' pinnacle
    On the broad horizon
    The sky begins to run
    With all of its' vibrant colors
    The reds yellows oranges
    It's so beautiful here today
    But I can't tell what's real
    My mind blurs
    Reality is set so far away
    A lonely feeling consumes
    No wind blows
    Yet I'm so cold here tonight

    So confused without you here
    I need your touch
    To make me feel real again
    I want to be in your arms
    It's where I feel safe
    I want your hand in mine
    It's where I feel serene
    I want you here
    I want you here with me

    So confused without you here
    I need your touch
    To make me feel real again
    I want to be in your arms
    It's where I feel safe
    I want your hand in mine
    It's where I feel serene
    I want you here
    I want you here with me

    I want you here
    I want you here with me
     
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    Will

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    Wow, bro.

    It's like you wrote that after you stole my brain and stuff. It's amazing. 10/10.
     
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    Andrea

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    Incredible! Great Job! :)
     
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    Terry

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    Wow, it's very deep. I love it.
     
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    Gaabjuh

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    thats so awesome.. really, its really, really great!!!!
     
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    Tim2

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    Wow guys ^_^

    Thank You alot it ment alot to me, alot. Thank You.
     

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