I Figured Spoiling Your Day Was Better Than Ruining Your Life

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    Dedicated

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    I don't really wanna talk about what this one's about but I hope you enjoy it. :unsure:


    "I Figured Spoiling Your Day Was Better Than Ruining Your Life"

    Yeah, whoa,
    Yeah, whoa.

    I remember your fearful eyes,
    Gazing awkwardly into the sky,
    Watching the birds and planes go by,
    Wondering if you'll make it out alive,
    After this, your final burning hour,
    You've torched my clothing with me inside,
    Ruined my life with intricate style,
    With the harmful words that you implied.

    No need to say a word,
    It's simpler than that,
    Just stare into the sky,
    And never look back.

    There's no need,
    No need to talk to me,
    No need to give me a reason,
    No need to give me a reason for why you are leaving.

    Caught up with you, a few towns over,
    Tail between your legs like a bitch,
    Running scared from the man that you loved,
    There's no reason to run,
    THERE'S NO REASON TO RUN!
    Yet still you insist on resisting my charms,
    I insist resistance is futile, but I'm forlorn,
    I have never felt so alone,
    But you've done it now baby, with insurgence in tons.

    There's no need,
    No need to talk to me,
    No need to give me a reason,
    No need to give me a reason for why you are leaving.

    Left me,
    Writhing and dreaming,
    Incased with my feelings, wishing you would come back,
    And wishing that I could relax,
    Relax,
    Just relax,
    Relax,
    Just relax,
    Yeah, relax.

    Only a few simple words,
    It's no harder than that,
    Just stare into the sky,
    And say that you'll come back.
     
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    esaul17

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    Wow....I really liked it. Great job!
     
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    Arhaz

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    it's fantastic. and the best thing...it flows perfectly.
     
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    Arlene

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    Wow, that was amazing. You have a real talent. Great job.

    And judging from what I read, I'm sorry. :hug:
     
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    Luke

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    I agree with Arhaz, the whole thing flows to perfection. Well done Dave. :)
     
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    Dedicated

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    Thanks a lot everyone :)
     

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