He's of Value? It's a question.

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by elie, Aug 22, 2003.

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    elie

    elie Well-Known Member

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    He's a valuable man
    Wasn't so sought after with a broken hand
    A valuable symbolism crushed his land
    What's it mean to him?

    Killed him with a curse and a blow to the head
    His family's dead
    Cursed and forgotten; and lost yet again

    Pursue chases that never end
    Bleeding heads and craniums inflated instead
    Lost again?
    He's been found and recycled like a homeless with no bed.

    Curse his own land?
    It's his own hand
    It was broken and shattered; destroyed once again
    Broke off as he wrote his last letter to his friend
    All that remains of these broken down men
    Are the thoughts and the memories passed on through their pen
     
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    Terry

    Terry Yeah, but I wish you were my shadow. LPA Super Member

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    It's pretty good. It was kinda confusing at first, but it's pretty cool.
     
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    Gaabjuh

    Gaabjuh Ambient

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    It's cool, i agree with terry, first a little confusing but cool!!!

    I had to reed it a few times to really understand (its early in the morning) but good job!!
     

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