Big news everyone. My band is in the stages of finishing it's first song and these will probably be the lyrics for the song (could possibly be edited though). So take note everyone, you're the first people outside of the band who're gonna see these lyrics so alot of feedback is much appreciated. Heard It All Before Burdens upon me They kill me so softly And the pain is so great I just wanna wish it all away This is my life So why do you cry? Why do you bleed? This shit’s beginning to get to me You lay there broken and for what? You lay there broken for you And we’re still suffering Hating for the things that you do Millions feel pain And yet you’re in the centre of a circle Wanting, hoping Just one of them will care Your obsession is attention Your intention’s not my care I didn’t need to hear again my dear That life just isn’t fair We've heard it all before And we don’t care anymore No, we just don’t care anymore Such little words Put a standstill on the world And is “nothing’s ever right” Is what you whispered in my ear tonight So why do you go And put yourself on show? Leave the party barely walking Only to get pissed at the people talking Corruption of a soul Is just one of your plights The hate, the disguise, the love of lies Being within limelight More like a shade of absinthe for your sins Your obsession is attention Your intention’s not my care I didn’t need to hear again my dear That life just isn’t fair We’ve all heard it all before And we don’t care anymore No, we just don’t care anymore Don’t bring me down Don’t bring me down with you I’m anything but you I’m anything but you Don’t bring me down Don’t bring me down with you I’m anything but you I’m anything but what you are You threat it so do it and leave Maybe then you’ll finally get what you want Your obsession is attention Your intention’s not my care I didn’t need to hear again my dear That life just isn’t fair We’ve all heard it all before And we don’t care anymore No, we just don’t care anymore Tie the noose tight, just to be sure.
That's some good stuff I'd say that there's one line I'm not fond of though. That's the line "Only to get pissed at the people talking", I'm not sure why but it doesn't seem to fit. I dunno *shrugs* Other than that, I like them and I'm looking forward to hearing the full song
"Your obsession is attention Your intention’s not my care" those are the best lines of the lyrics, according to me. it's really awesome this piece, in every way. looks like it has come from a lot of thinking and moulding. i hope this song is a great success, so all the best to you and your band!