Inspired by Dušan's ''Every Superhero Sleeps Alone''. I'm pissed, because I had it finished and accidently deleted it...I had to write it from scratch again...if it seems incomplete, please tell me. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ When heroes can't save us: We come closer than before, but still end up making the same mistakes The moment seemed perfect, almost flawless but your intentions have become much more noxious It's like I'm oblivious to you If you really are who I thought I knew I've mislead myself again, for the last time 'cause nothing I've done feels quite right Corrupted, we look up to others Say ''hello'' When you cling to another so-called 'hero' Do you remember the last time? When we still felt comfort, we felt secure Confused, are you sincere, are you pure? I don't know how much of this I can endure Corrupted, we look up to others Say ''hello'' When you cling to another so-called 'hero' Don't get your hopes up, even heroes run the risk to drown After all, we all know: It's the small losses that bring a man down Corrupted, we look up to others Say ''hello'' When you cling to another so-called 'hero' Say ''hello'', say ''hello'', say... ''hello''
I'm very glad you liked it. And thank you to you too, for posting what inspired this Those were my favorite lines too...I can't remember too well, but I believe I heard ''It's the small losses that bring a man down'' from some game before.
Don't get your hopes up, even heroes run the risk to drown After all, we all know: It's the small losses that bring a man down my fav part...fantastic..those lines almost just bring the whole pom o life. *standing ovation* i thought you were inspired by dusan when i read the title. i love it when poets get inspired by one another. just coming to writers cove inspires me. a good job!
Thank you very much. I have to say. Quite a few of you (Hellflame, esaul, you, etc.) have inspired me so many times. Not even that, you've given me goals. I really, really want to be as talented as most of you are some day. I'm not quite there yet, but when I look back at what I used to write, I'm very happy with the progress I've made, thanks to the critique and the support you guys have given me.