Every Superhero Sleeps Alone

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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    This has been in the work for months now, and I finally put it together the way I feel it's right. Comments will be appreciated.


    Every Superhero Sleeps Alone

    Put into the coffin of a life in neon lights
    Circling round and round throughout the sleepless nights
    Back in my seat and all I need is few more shots
    And all the people below look like black little dots

    My mind is blurred and crystal clear at the same time
    I need to go back but I can't leave you behind
    They say that after the storm is gone stars shine more clearly
    I guess I'd prove them wrong if only they could see me

    Fuck the world, I'm sick of lying to myself
    I call this home but I still feel that I'm misplaced
    Back in my seat another hour I remain
    With eyes shut tight hoping this nightmare comes to end

    They call me hero but I'm just a tragic man
    Who saved the whole world but he could not save himself
    You promised everything was gonna be alright
    Well I will prove you wrong tonight

    Honey, I know that it's late
    And nothing I can say will change your mind
    But how come you don't realise it was a mistake
    Honey, we have to go back

    And now I'm lost just like before
    And now I'm lost maybe even more
    And i can't go on
    I can't go on
    I can't go on..

    Honey, I know that it's late
    And nothing I can say will change your mind
    But how come you don't realise it was a mistake
    Honey, we have to go back
     
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    Arhaz

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    the title dragged me right in..and after that i needn't say more. your best piece yet. it leaves me speechless.
     
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    El Muerto

    El Muerto LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Thanks :D

    It's kinda inspired by that last episode of Lost. Yeah I'm a little obsessed with that show :lol:
     
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    Seinfeld

    Seinfeld We are the nobodies LPA Super Member

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    I agree with Arhaz...the titel really gets you hooked. And afterwards, you can't stop until it's finished.

    One thing that comes to mind when I read this, is a relationship that shouldn't have happened. Like this guys saying: We made a mistake and we need to go back to the way things used to be, cause even Heroes can't live a lie to make everyone happy.

    Very strong :thumbsup:
     
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    El Muerto

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    Thanks a lot :)

    I'm glad you feel it's open for interpretation :)
     

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