The Great Blindfold

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    esaul17

    esaul17 antichrist

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    This poem looks more like a rap. It is far from my best piece, but I like to try different things every once in a while. Please comment!


    It’s like, I thought I knew what I wanted, but sometimes it’s just so unsure…You just can’t choose who you fall in love with, know what I mean? It just hits you, and then when it does, everything you thought of before is forgotten in an instant.

    Will you be a girl into heavy metal music?
    Admitting to biases as an excuse to excuse it
    Hair dye and a temper made to lose it
    A hint of narcotics and a quick way to abuse it
    Take a friendship, and you can’t help but bruise it
    A helping hand, but you would refuse it
    Would I love you, when I cannot use it?
    That’s the problem you never get to choose it

    Or maybe you’d be a girl with a penchant for religion
    Open up my heart to make a quick incision
    Ignoring the Crusades and the Inquisition
    Yet I could love her beyond condition
    Proposing a Creationist’s proposition
    My school of thought meets a head on collision
    Antithetical to my world vision
    But love, it is never one’s own decision

    Knock it, block it and sock it
    Overclock it, load and lock it
    Cock it, fired off to shock it
    Mock it, but you can’t unlock it
    Love’s answer in this heart-shaped locket

    After running through the two I already felt for
    No, feel for, despite the unpleasant décor
    I now wonder if I would reject or
    Inject a feminine reflector
    Feeling lost, yeah call me a scalar
    No path, I know I’m not a vector
    In my internal galaxy I’m the inventor
    But even then you can’t choose whom is at your center

    Would I want a girl who was into fashion?
    Who could move with the trends; be the latest attraction?
    To hold her hand just to see the reaction
    Of those wishing they had a piece of the action
    Or do I want a girl who was able to ration-
    Rationalize between the person and the passion
    But would such a love be too ashen?
    None can pick what to take from an interaction

    Hold it, bold it, and mould it
    Fold it, struck and rolled it
    Tolled it, let go and sold it
    Behold it but never controlled it
    Who you will love, none could have foretold it

    So would I want a girl in favour of the sexual
    Opposed to one obsessed with the intellectual?
    Would I see one so purely conceptual
    As cold and emotionally ineffectual
    A girl like a disease that is lectual
    Love does possess a difference that’s aspectual
    Take it as a verb if the noun’s unefectual
    If you can’t resist is it still consentual?

    Well I think I want a girl who’s about nineteen
    Give or take a few years to stay in the green
    Not looking to go places she’s never been
    Or needing to see sights she’s never seen
    Who stays away from drugs, yeah keeps herself clean
    Rational yet romantic with the beauty of a queen
    Supportive, educated, and candidly keen
    And angelic wings as this is a dream

    Leave it, believe or deceive it
    Cleave it, grieve it, or weave it
    Relieve it, or try to up heave it
    Receive it and you might perceive it
    But with love, none can conceive it
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    i fucking love your versitality and vocabulary. you are a god!
     

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