Today(temporary title)Feedback Please

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Red Union, Jul 21, 2007.

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    Red Union

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    Life is like a enigma/some people try to figure it out/some people try to beat it down/leaving the others in the dust/ what's all the fuss/ why don't you reach out and len a helping hand

    Why has the world gone insane/wh do we keep trying in vain/ to save more time/ while the seconds keep ticking away/ you'll soon find/ that all we have is today

    Running around/from dad to day/looking all around/we must think were a city of ants/always going on endless rants/

    Why has the world gone insane/wh do we keep trying in vain/ to save more time/ while the seconds keep ticking away/ you'll soon find/ that all we have is today

    You gotta be a codemaster/wit problems comming at us faster/just listen to the laughter/it's all we got left/to just give your best/

    Why has the world gone insane/wh do we keep trying in vain/ to save more time/ while the seconds keep ticking away/ you'll soon find/ that all we have is today

    Why has the world gone insane/wh do we keep trying in vain/ to save more time/ while the seconds keep ticking away/ you'll soon find/ that all we have is today​
     
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    Arhaz

    Arhaz ...waiting. LPA Super Member

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    nice one. guess it would have been better if i actually heard you rap it for me.
     
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    Red Union

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    thank you, and I've been trying to get something togeather for people to listen to but that might take awhile currently working on my next one right now
     

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