Jawknee's Poetry

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    There you are. Finally you make a comment. Thanks!!! :)
     
  2. #62
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    My girlfriend's parents are very strict. We dated secretly without telling them in hopes we would soon but they eventually found out on their own. The day she told me they found out, was a very depressing day. We both worried the outcome of our relationship. I wrote a poem the day she told me they knew; it's untitled.

    What's said is said;
    At last the truth is revealed.
    Simply because the difficulty thickens,
    Doesn't mean I'll abandon all that's been gained.
    I gave you my all,
    You returned it the same;
    I'm still here,
    I don't care how hard it gets in this love game.
    Without you, who am I?
    Incomplete is what I am.
    All I need is the slightest touch of your hand.
    From this day forth, the journey toughens,
    But i'll never stop believing in our love.
    You're my other half,
    You're the girlfriend people think doesn't exist;
    Little do they know that I'm living out my wish.
    You're my dream into reality,
    And I cry now because so do you.
    I'll never let them tear us apart,
    It's impossible because it'd kill my heart.
    You're the biggest part of my life;
    You make me smile so much, you'll one day be my wife.
     
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    John.

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    Jawknee, that's a some real good stuff, good work on it and keep up the good work man ;), your definetely one of the best writer's here, I'll be checking in on your stuff from now on. :D
     
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    Awesome, thanks so much, With You. :)
     
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    yeah, no problem ^_^
     
  6. #66
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    This one's one of my best poems I've ever written. I wrote it for my current girlfriend.
    <div align=center>
    Flourish

    Days elongate into what seems years,
    And thinking of you triggers sad tears.
    When we must depart because the time lacks,
    I find myself madly running right back.
    A normal day is you on my mind,
    From morning-wake ‘till I rest at night.
    Even then, I find you there inside my dreams,
    Looking as lovely as you could ever be.
    Jump into my arms and simply close your eyes,
    As I feel the warmth of you and you of I.
    Let the essence of love softly take control,
    So soothing is this love that endlessly flows.
    Then you kiss me with kisses of creamy savor,
    Soft, damp, and pretty lips that give me such pleasure.
    The moment seems to consist of only you and I,
    Even though perhaps many people will pass us by.
    We’ve started a love that always feels as though still new,
    Moments like these say I dedicate my life to you.
    Forever we will grow with happiness by our side,
    Prospering together, sharing our love ‘till we die.
    Your giggles that lighten my face,
    Make me want to kiss you posthaste.
    But when I think of your laugher when you’re away,
    I can only sit here and cry away the day.
    What can I do when you’re so completely far from me?
    Why is that we’re separated so constantly?
    There are some times when sleeping at night can be inane,
    For I just think of memories from earlier days.
    I weep the feeling of your fingers wrapped on my hand so tight,
    And how I stroke your cheek each time that you glare into my eyes.
    Our love still gets deeper as the days slowly move on,
    But I just want to hold you in my arms all night long.
    It still feels like the first time when you press your lips tenderly on mine,
    And I still melt at the way you tell me how much you love me each time.
    Your wonderful scent lingers as we reluctantly have to let go,
    But you hold on to my hand and gently rub it with your thumb so slow.
    Already, tears start forming now that the warmth from you begins to fade,
    Because I only flourish when you embrace me and kiss me for days.
    I am thrust against your body as we one more time kiss one another,
    But one kiss turns into another, each more romantic than the other.
    With deep sighs of woe we know the time has come to an end,
    And truly we make our real last kiss the most passionate.
    But it never really is the last kiss goodbye,
    It’s really the first kiss to the rest of our lives.</div>
     
  7. #67
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    Here's the first poem I wrote for my current girlfriend.

    <div align=center>A Love That Grows

    I was alone for so long, always thinking someone to love would be nice,
    And you came along, and redefined happiness for the rest of my life.
    My back was always against the world, but I turned around to see you,
    Someone who intrigued me in a unique way, so on my own I went to meet you.
    Gradually, we became closer, until I could no longer pretend,
    And I knew it was time to move on from just being friends.
    The day I made a commitment was the day I made a promise to you,
    Where I would give you my heart in hopes that you would give me yours too.
    I never had a doubt; I could internally feel you were sent to be mine,
    I never wanted to rush you and to show you this, I gave you so much time.
    Anytime I smile, I owe it to you that it’s on my face,
    Because you make me feel warm and safe.
    My heart was always weak and out of nowhere you came to restore,
    Now there isn’t one more thing that I could ask for.
    I’ve fallen so deep for your inner and outer beauty,
    You know me like I thought no one else knew me.
    You’re my best friend and I’ve given you my entire trust and all my love,
    You sparked this flame inside of me, and now you’re all I think of.
    There’s nothing I would rather do any day,
    Than to share my love with you in every way.
    You can call it destiny, luck, or maybe just label this as faith,
    But either way you look at it, I’m yours and I’m here to stay.
    When I hold you in my arms, it’s as if I’m holding heaven altogether,
    And when I say I love you, I’m really saying that I want to be with you forever.
    Our relationship was a gift and I’m never more thankful each day for it,
    The way you touch me, and kiss me, I just want more of it.
    Every night I go to bed, I can still smell your hair and taste your kiss,
    I still feel you within in my arms and your fingers embraced with my fingertips.
    As long as your love remains on my side,
    My life is wonderful and everything in it is fine.
    You’re the only that I love and I adore,
    And now I don’t have to go on searching anymore.
    I believe in you and pray God watches over you everyday and night,
    Knowing you’re okay and safe is the only way I’m able to sleep so tight.
    I keep you on my mind and treasure every moment that arrives,
    You’ve made such a tremendous impact on my life.
    Confide in me anytime you need me for whatever purpose it is,
    Because it’s how I can thank you for giving me so much bliss.
    No other human being comes close to you, none of the rest,
    Because we’re the only ones who share a special double happiness.
    You’re my precious girl who matters to me the most,
    Because you and I share a love that always grows.</div>
     
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    Still ######' awesome, Jonny. Don't ever stop writing. :D
     
  9. #69
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    I wrote this for my current girlfriend like 2 days ago.

    <div align=center>Settled Down

    Almost two years into this relationship and I still have that burning fire.
    Hundreds of days together is something I can look at and admire.
    It still baffles me how the two of us were able to cross paths,
    And eventually strengthen our attachment into a love that still lasts.
    All of my life, I’ve aspired to win over the heart of just one girl,
    But after so much heartbreak, I feared she was nowhere in this world.
    Every relationship I had in the past had faltered in my mind,
    Because I felt like my feelings were stronger than the other person all the time.
    I would do so much for them, and I felt as though nothing changed,
    And even after all the sweetness from me, I was dumped and injected with pain.
    Then you knocked on my door and came inside my world,
    And after some getting-to-know-one-another, you became my girl.
    Once we began dating, every one of my mornings began with a nice big grin.
    For once in my life, I had fallen for a girl who had fallen for me too; I felt certain.
    When I think about us and what we’ve accomplished,
    I’m joyful to say the love in this relationship is equally balanced.
    You actually appreciate the things I do for you,
    And when I need you to be there for me, you actually pull through.
    When I reach over to kiss your lips, you never push me away.
    When I enclose my arms around your body, you always stay.
    Sometimes things get astray but you and I always make it out alright,
    And that’s because we both take time to work things out right.
    I’m so thankful to have found you and for being a part of my world,
    And I promise to love you like you were my first girl.
    When I hold your hand, I feel the warmth of you,
    And it secures my heart knowing that you love me too.
    I’m really in love with you, so much to say you are the one;
    The one I plan to start a family with and live a life a fun.
    No one speaks to me the way you do.
    No other person can caress me like you.
    You’re the only person who calms my nerves when they’re on the edge.
    You’re the only one who’d be waiting for me at the bottom if I jumped a ledge.
    I’m so close to you and you’re so close to me.
    I never knew such a love could ever be.
    I was never able to convince myself that a love was out there waiting for me.
    I started to believe in the saying “love is blind,” but you’ve made me see.
    For the first time, I know I can turn to my side and expect to see someone there.
    You’re always standing by me, even when you’re not physically there.
    For once when I cried tears of pleasure or wept tears of pain,
    You were at your house doing the exact same.
    You love me; you tell me and show me to prove it to be true.
    If I really had to, I would sacrifice my life for you.
    You’re more than just my girlfriend, honey, you’re everything; my all.
    I’m so thankful that I was able to answer the phone once destiny called.</div>
     
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    Oh my God! :eek:

    *sheds a tear*

    That was very beautiful. I swear. You're an amazing writer. Keep up the excellent work! ;) :)
     
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    Thank you so much for that comment. I shall post another poem eventually.
     
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    Omg, I absolutely LOVED that poem. It's really one of your best yet. :D It really shows how much love you have in your heart for her, which is unbelievably sweet.
     
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    For my current girlfriend.

    <div align=center>I Need You Now

    I seem to want you more at three in the morning.
    Being away from you like this is like someone taking away my oxygen.
    How is it I yearn so much for your kisses?
    How come I can’t stop saddening myself at three in the morning?

    Keeping my mind on you is something I unconsciously do all day,
    But once the nocturnal hours approach, the desires grow stronger.
    My consciousness is now fully awake,
    And all my heart is doing is dying without your body near.

    My bed is bare with the clutter of blankets and pillows.
    My arms are full of despair until you become the replacement.
    I stare at all the memorabilia on my shelves.
    Won’t you come here and keep me warm tonight?

    You must have cast a spell on me.
    When the night creeps on, I think of you more.
    Tonight I’m intoxicated with your love running through my veins.
    I could drive to your house just to see your face in your room’s window again.

    The gentle air of my fan is your sweet breath on my face,
    And if I hold my pillow while I sleep, I can pretend it’s you.
    My diet consists of only your sweet kisses,
    And I can never get enough of them to keep me sustained.

    Loneliness is my companion here in my own room,
    But it’s not helping me keep my sanity.
    My hands are bare without yours there to hold them.
    My senses are dull without your charming beauty in my presence to enlighten.

    If I could see you somehow right now at four in the morning,
    My heart would do somersaults as I squeezed you.
    Just let me come over and wait for you to rise,
    Because the first words in the morning, I want them to be mine.

    Every time I see you, I fall in love with you again even deeper.
    Each time I say I love you, I say it like it’s the first time.
    I wish you could be here so I could look into your lovely eyes.
    I miss you so much right now and I can’t hold back my cries.</div>
     
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    Wow, just, wow! :eek: That was really sweet. Excellent work. ;)
     
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    Damn, Jonny. Still amazing.

    Keep it up. :)
     
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    Thank you, everyone. Hopefully more to come, soon. ^_^
     
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    Jawknee, ur great :) i like them all.
     

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