"Empty" Every drop of flame Lights a candle Written in your name The angels call It out loud I was blank and empty I had to try and find A piece of me was missing I have found what I'm looking for The answer lies inside Ashes to ashes Dust to dust These are the words Built on human trust I long to feel your heavenly touch Rest your body And your soul I was blank and empty I had to try and find A piece of me was missing I have found what I'm looking for The answer lies inside Now its time to see If what we have is real I have this nauseous sensation It makes me feel alive Come now and lay your Body next to mine I was blank and empty I had to try and find A piece of me was missing I have found what I'm looking for The answer lies inside -------------------------------- "Silence" I live in silence Like a virus Building up steadily Ready to unleash All my fury In my eyes I can see you need help Your struggling to find Your mind and soul You've misplaced Hidden in side The key element Of my attack is surprise Building up steadily Ready to unleash All my fury In my eyes I can see you need help Your struggling to find Your mind and soul You've misplaced Silence is paramount Silence is paramount In my eyes I can see you need help Your struggling to find Your mind and soul You've misplaced
Empty: This song is very different from most of the stuff we get on the LPA Forums. Probably cause it is a bit of a love song, or at least the end is. For the unconventionalness (actually a word?): 5 points. Vocabulary: 3 points. Phrasing needs a bit of work though. (8/10)