hey, i made this rap up recently: your telling me that i cannot rhyme have you heard my lyrics? they are not about crime looks like to me your emceeing in the rain have you heard your lines they sound f ucking lame oh what a shame you just want the fame! here i am emceeing in the sun with my fans around me boy they're having fun but look at you you have no where to run cos this girl right here is getting you done have you heard your rhymes they sound bloody crap your thinking of one but in your in trap all cos you just cannot rap! the clock is ticking try to counter act me oh wait you can't so start rhyming practically actively tacitly but your way too slow being up against me boy i made i you blow
and another one: all you people trying to put s hit on me i am gonna beat you guys lyrically to sex, drugs, rock n roll to speed, weed and birth control people these days call that rap to me i just call it total crap they are loads of things you can rap about like politics, disease and your shout now that's what you call an intellegent rap even 50 cent can't even draw a map cos all he raps bout the same old same we know he's dumb he can't write his own name there are loads of intellegent rappers out there who dedicate thier lives everyday of the year the rhymes they come up with are just so sophisticated but 50 cent childish and manipulated the intellgent and the dumb battling in freestyle come on intellegent you'll drown them in the nile this kinda of bullshit will never stop and once you start them they'll never drop you'll see them in magazines from the shop with gangsta rap and someone dying they won't take the blame they are f ucking lying with families mourning laying thier crying the rappers in the gang with thier f ucked up slang and BANG someone is shot they don't care they are just smoking pot cos the s hit they write they think it's god damn cool i don't think so they are f uckingfools people who say they call this rap oh boy oh boy they need a slap will this nonsene ever end of course it won't it's a f ucking a trend people say that white boys can't rap look at shinoda and eminem at least they don't talk about condems they rap about things that are so apolitical they think carefully with thier lines they are so analytical but look at the dumbs ones just so uncritical I don't care what colour you are or a famous movie star my message hear today I don't care if your gay not matter what your race everyone can rap up or down at thier own pace but the ones I dissed are a total disgrace!
another one: you and me are battling in this arena the #### you come up with they're worse than christina to britney, jessica and mandy moore thier lyrics are just nothing but whore so quit thinking like a bloody twelve year old and start emceeing properly like a pot of gold but being up against me your already frozen cold dissing me as i unfold it would be a bad advice. i'm hitting at you cos my lines are precise your staring me your as cold as ice for goodness sake i'm battling with you i just want you to break with your neck falling off feeling pain and ache the #### i am giving you just cannot take you think you can fly like a butterfly and sting like bee, i mean come on you can't even emcee cos i can to a tolerable degree!
another rap: so you think it's cool to smoke fags and weed sticking needles in your arm as they start bleed you will get high oh yes indeed do you realise your health is at risk your lungs will be damaged like a broken floppy disk the doctor is saying you may have cancer you feel angry your demanding for an answer then he says yes you won't be celebrating with your exotic dancer why do people do this #### they are nothing but dumb they have no ####### whit then there are people who are alcoholic they rap about these things they think it's symbolic people getting drunk day in day out they can't break the habit they just can't live without the bliming thing kills brain cells your stuck on question your mind doesn't ring bells can't you see the stuff is killing you it's worse than blink 182 so take my advice just bloody stop before you drink drive and get caught by the cops for killing a human being their loved ones seeing the pain they are feeling the innocent main is dead cos of your drink driving
i like how you incorperate certain elements into your raps. you come up and write about things that concern you instead of the same old same every other rapper writes about. Your very creative and i like your style. good raps.
i wrote more: a-b-c-d-e-f-g continue the alphabet and try to emcee with your dim witted lines and your illiterate rhymes going on and on about gun crime rapping about this shows me your uneducated collaborating with hip hop you should be segregated so let me teach you some new terminology genetic, aesthetic, telekinetic psychology listening to these words your going crazy in a car crash as your mind is damaged these words sound like trash as i battle with you i sound intellectual The therapy I gave you was just ineffectual so as I grab your lines and cut it's throat drown them into your hands like a sinking boat using the water as ink as i write my rap note writing in red water I am the slaughter battling you in freestyle is defiantly worthwhile cos after all my lines are versatile we know when you rap you sound bloody dumb cos all you can say is "your..mum" thinking in your brain as you bloody climb error error command processing overhead time gives me a sign you just cannot rhyme as i rise in this hip hop division wanna be part of it? you need my supervision battling with me was pretty intense next time i do it I'll destroy your biological warfare defence so don't rap about everyone "in da club" we all know 50 cent is a ####### snub so you think your an emcee oh god never your here with me now you won't last forever ----------- as i rise out of this towering inferno true emcees not rapping about porno cos the ones who collaborate into this section spreading it like a disease worse than an ear infection writing rhymes as they think it's witty i don't think so, they sound so shitty hearing thier raps they have no originality look at d12 such a psychopathic personality as they always diss homosexuality and problems with mentallity all these dumb rappers do is diss diss diss them joining the true emcee clan i'll drown them in an oceanic abyss so you wanna be an emcee you gotta be level headed battling with pros you're already shredded ranking yourself in the emcee society the ameutur, the professional, the expert there is a variety it's not easy to think of good rhymes and lines the pro emcees are dressed to the nines
my latest one --> as i rise out of this towering inferno true emcees not rapping about porno cos when you collaborate into this section spreading it like a disease worse than an ear infection writing rhymes as you think it's so witty i don't think so, they sound so shitty hearing your raps you have no originality look at you such a psychopathic personality as they always diss homosexuality and problems with mentallity all you dumb rappers do is diss diss diss you joining the true emcee clan i'll drown you in an oceanic abyss so you wanna be an emcee you gotta be level headed battling with me you're already shredded ranking yourself in the emcee society the ameutur, the professional, the expert there is a variety it's not easy to think of good rhymes and lines the pro emcees are dressed to the nines metaphors, similies and personifcations including this in rap is a good combination your rapping velocity is too slow speed it up, you need the acceleration it takes a long time to get to my posiition thinking of healthy lines that are in a good condition cos when your battling with a girl like me I will fire a bomb and you'll be nothing but debris now your suffering with traumatic stress look at you, your nothing but a mess cos i'm hitting on you with 100% success as i drown my lines in your head cutting your nerves your're already dead!
my latest so far --> this is how it'll begin smacking my lyrics right up to your chin they'll be so bad you'll be blown to berlin as go from counsel right up to the crown your status in rap will be demoted a step down feeling so dreadful your turning yellowish brown grabbing your lines as i make them injure shredding with a samurai sword i am the ninja as i battle with u there will be no escape as i say these rhymes i generate no hate as they rise to the top they'll be so bait cos i've smashed you already on line 8 u wanna continue this battle make your decision i'll cut you badly with a lyrical incision as you drop dead down into my territorial division crashing my lines in to your brain going to down to the bottom destroying cerebral vein feeling atrocious pain as i have left ferocious stain the damage i did is making you psychotic getting so crazy taking the daily antibiotic cos you've lost your talent to be an emcee the engine in your brain has no ignition key your running away in a car chase going far far away as i smashed you down to intergalactic space now your lyrics and lines have no pace cos i've thrashed badly in this rat race
That sounds pretty good. Took me awhile to read em all, but it was worth it. Averaging out the scores, (8/10).
thanks here's a freestyle i did: your battling with me now what your gonna do i'll squash you with a fat lady and a fat man to hearing your lines as I give an analytical review 10 seconds late they are already overdue as time fly by's in each hour of right asecension your so #### in rap you crash into a different dimension as yor brain gets smaller you have no intellectual capacity you had no audacity to question my rap decision i'm battling with you right now i am a phase of cell division blinding you with my lyrics in a ghastly envision as you drown down in a monsoon i annihilate you with a lyricall typhoon 5 to 11 your dead twelve noon i am point of accumulation your stuck sick consitpation stil in isolation i will poison your lines in a secret assasination right here right now in rap communication
You vocabulary is flexible and very well-enriched. But can you deal with this? A lyrical establishment, On the edge of vocal heaven On cloud nine, Edge of the line Between you sucky rappers And the gods of lyrical onslaught What we know can't be taught To idjits like you Who can only rap about girls they Will never screw. Pimpin'? Spend your time rappin Cause I'm rippin' Your rhymes And tearing your lines. Okay, that sucked. B)
it's ok actually...at least your not like some real #### rappers like ja rule! my latest one --> as i play god in this rap battle using my powers to smash you down to seattle everyone knows i am a master in theology i created humans in biology cos i will poison your lines badly with my knowledge in toxicology as the poison goes down right to your throat fizzing in your bronchi making you choke going to the blood to brain giving you a major stroke cos now you've lost your emcee profession your mind is so damaged your suffering from psychotic depression cos from this rap session your talent i must question cos i am winning this war of the rap succession in my rhyme mind you will find weapons of mass destruction as i become a threat to you as your lines will malfunction destroying your rhyme main CPU spread your rhyming database debris all over katmandu 5 seconds ago you were the rap terminator anything you can do, i can do better cos i am the exterminator
another: yo yo yo, i'm a wicked asian emcee thinking of clever lines as far as the eye can see bad ass this time oh yes indeed your firing rhyme bombs right at me i will capture you and you'll be my detainee locking you up in a tight lock cell throwing away the key by my military personnel ranking high in my rap officer position thinking clever lines knowing every dictionary definition and in this rap reality there is not rhyme abnormality as you think of ones that are without formality wow your wearing some nice bling bling 24 carrot gold crown and bracelets you look like a king saying this informal #### is bent and twisted it doesn't make your lyrics look cool and tight fisted cos when i am banging my lines on you your begging for mercy, you're wishing i never existed ding ding ding is that bell i am now the devil in this scorching hell hole as i take your rap body and soul you just have no self control
thanks here's a freestyle: calling yourself an emcee your such a minor tears flooding in your eyes wearing some cheap ass eyeliner demolishing your lines with mass torture intense as an inferno boy this is a scorcher looking left to right getting afraid of my silhouette getting so paranoid smoking the marijuana cigarette high lyrical adrenaline making you sweat can you take in my #### without becoming upset i fire rhyme bombs sing song my lyrics are as sick as king kong stuck at the bottom it's my lines you just tripped on juvenile delinquent minds combined with rhymes that are a disgrace to mankind blowing the same old same in every rap breeze going to generation to generation like an inherited disease producing these lines is just a publicity stunt when i snap it your mind will just go blunt so here i go again with my rap campaign destroying the lines in your brain cos they are f ucking insane
my latest: using my rap powers to cause a nuclear disaster neutronic chain reaction so i can enable this line faster collaborating with physics i am a master as my rap mind is so powerful i'm a dangerous spell castor unique metaphorical lines that are notorious telling the whole world as i remain high and glorious smashing you, crashing you with lines, as you become furious sorry love, i've won i remain victorious pleasing every emcee as i am called the perfectionist hearing your lines as you remain a rejectionist chanting lines is my daily meditation thinking of metaphors similes and personifications of course it's true rap, it's a dedication murdering people's mind as your a dictator hater, traitor rapping about weapons of mass destruction as they found on your rap equator giving you a special name i'll call you saddam hussain cos your lines are pure #### they are so-damn-insane as my rhymes stream perpetually from the sun producing deadly radiation as you've become so numb gamma rays, x-rays, ultraviolet, infrared destroying your brain cells as you drop dead skin peeling off as it begins to crumble boy oh boy this is good lets get ready to rumble