My friend's playing in a band with a female vocalists and they had a cool tune but no lyrics so I wrote this for them Only Memories Time's drawing near The pendulum it slowly swings I have no fear Of end and everything it brings My love is high Higher than any mountain Carved into heart Can never be forgoten I cry your name but you're so far away If only you were here today I try and try but you're too far away The sky opens wide Only memories Keep me close to bliss I'm on the edge but I'm still holding on Before I end this race I need to see your face Just one last time and I'll be dead and gone I gasp for breath Still haven't finished everything I feel the death Crawling slowly under my skin My heart is full My door is open wide for him Just one more second Before I give in I cry your name but you're so far away If only you were here today I try and try but you're too far away The sky opens wide Only memories Keep me close to bliss I'm on the edge but I'm still holding on Before I end this race I need to see your face Just one last time and I'll be dead and gone
I like it, but acording to that song structure, that verses need a bridge verse, I will post one: Why are you far away from me? I need to see your white face one more time, it´s the last time; so I can rest in peace forever. I hope this works...
Well the structure of the actual song is: verse-bridge-chorus-verse-bridge-chorus (posted here) plus a solo and then bridge followed by chorus again. I think they already recorded it but thanks for the comment and for the suggestion anyway