"Cheaper Than A Cheater" There can no be dispute, I can be kind of cute sometimes, And I think I've gotta make you see, That separation is not key to, Stopping unwanted feelings, That form in your head. This is the fourth time this has happened now, Do you ever think that this is how it's meant to be now? But you look so pretty, yes you look so pretty, In this light. Is this the kind of line, That goes into instant message names, I've loved you forever and always, Forever and always will never change. You, should be talking to me, not him, You, should be fucking me, not him, Yeah, you, should be talking to me, not him, You, should be fucking me, not him, Yeah, you, should be talking to me, not him, You, should be fucking me, not him, Yeah, you, should be talking to me, not him, You, should be fucking me, not him. This is the fourth time this has happened now, Do you ever think that this is how it's meant to be now? But you look so pretty, yes you look so pretty, For a cheat. --------------- "Balcony" Last night we sat out by the stars, I've never been less impressed, The wind was so cold so I felt underdressed. Take one last look, over the balcony, It might not seem pretty to you, but it's so pretty to me, And as the stars and boats merge neatly into one, It seems stupid to ask where the night sky has begun. I'd never once forgotten who you are, But that night I forgot it all, My head so filled with thoughts, a mental plane crash, Never have I been so filled with thoughts so crass. Take one last look, over the balcony, It might not seem pretty to you, but it's so pretty to me, And as the stars and boats merge neatly into one, It seems stupid to ask where the night sky has begun. Surely the stars have never seemed so close? Like the dreams I had have never seemed so faux, Never again shall I forget you for a single moment, I've made that mistake before, you came back with torment. Take one last look, over the balcony, It might not seem pretty to you, but it's so pretty to me, And as the stars and boats merge neatly into one, It seems stupid to ask where the night sky has begun. -------------- "All Expenses Paid" Nine pints down, your round, I'm drunk, And always trying to get with you, Elisa, this is love. Six shots in, did your dress just scream, "Take me off, take me (this is love) off." Elisa take your two week package life, All expenses paid, And throw it from the rooftop while you shout to proclaim, All the lies and dreams you've shed, All the lives and loves from which you've fled. Ten pints down, my round, I'm fucked, Living my nightmares, Elisa, this is love. Elisa take your two week package life, All expenses paid, And throw it from the rooftop while you shout to proclaim, All the lies and dreams you've shed, All the lives and loves from which you've fled. We'll cut off your blonde hair, To see if you're still a pretty girl, Strap you to this chair, Make you live your nightmares.
2>3>1 Not bad at all, I really like your style of writing. Have you got any songs recorded? Btw, it's fourth
You've got some pretty good shit going on there. I like the guitars on all songs and the lyrics are good as well, but maybe singer could sing a little louder? (I don't know if it's you singing). My favourites: You're What Us Common.. and Minesweeper. And I meant about this but's it's not really important, I was just joking Anyway, keep up the good work, you guys have potential
Cheers. Yeah, I do need to sing louder like but it was also a problem with the mixing. Thanks for listening And lmfao! I didn't even notice sorry haha! Thanks again
I gotta agree with Dusan with the 2>3>1 To be honest Dave, there isn't much of your work I don't like, but 'Cheaper Than A Cheater' didn't do it for me at all I'm afraid. But you know I mean the best when I say that. The others were the awesome though.
Cheers everyone. @Hellflame, I'm working on some more lyrics now which you may like actually. I'll give you a preview on MSN whenever you're next online. @esaul17, at the moment we've got like, one song up for download on http://www.purevolume.com/vacancyin305 but I doubt we'll be putting more up until we've got them professionally recorded. Once that's done, I'll probably post it somewhere in the Other Bands section so keep an eye out
I actually liked Cheaper than a Cheater quite a bit. I repeat, Go Dedicated! Seems it's been ages since you've posted something new.
Cheers and yeah, it has been quite a while. I've had a bit of a writer's block thing going on. Well, I say that, I just haven't had any inspiration or anything to write about as I got bored of writing the usual kinda thing. Despite these being similar, the latest lyrics I'm working on are completely different.