Met A Four By Dressing To The Nines

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    Dedicated

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    "Met A Four By Dressing To The Nines"

    I wonder how much, I'm missing,
    Is home life, better than abroad?
    Fair enough, this is where I find inspiration,
    But other than that, I'm pretty bored.

    Does the last verse I wrote come across as arrogant?
    Because it's filled with lines in first person,
    But then again I am the greatest person to have ever walked the earth,
    The only person more deserving than you.

    Dressed to kill; would have me up in arms,
    If I wasn't dressed to the nines,
    If I couldn't work my charms.
    I'll have you swooning so much,
    You'll be used to looking up,
    You'll be craving my touch,
    By the second look you take.

    But enough about how much I love me,
    Let's talk about how much you do,
    If I could write words more true than these,
    I'd go down in history.

    I don't keep my friends up to date on what's going on,
    But when I need reminding that I can do better than her,
    I just tell one of them she's got a boyfriend,
    But it shouldn't bother them at all.

    Dressed to kill; would have me up in arms,
    If I wasn't dressed to the nines,
    If I couldn't work my charms.
    I'll have you swooning so much,
    You'll be used to looking up,
    You'll be craving my touch,
    By the second look you take.

    (But enough about how much I love me,
    Let's talk about how much you do,
    But enough about how much I love me,
    Let's talk about how much you do,
    But enough about how much I love me,
    Let's talk about how much you do,
    But enough about how much I love me,
    Let's talk about how much you do.)

    If I could write words more true than these,
    I'd go down in history,
    If I could write words more true than these,
    I'd go down in history,
    If I could write words more true than these,
    I'd go down in history,
    If I could write words more true than these,
    I'd go down in history.
     
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    El Muerto

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    I like these lines the most:

    I could easily imagine myself singing that the whole day :lol:

    Nice job :)
     
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    Cool, similar to My Chemical Romance writing. The "Dressed to kill..." verse is great. I see myself singing that in the future.
     
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    Cheers. The comments are appreciated :D


    I love to write stuff which I think people will find catchy so I'm glad you both do :)
     
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    Linja

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    Go Dedicated!
     
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    Cheers :D
     
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    I heartily endorse this event or product :)
     

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